House Cat

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gray house cat hidden under dead summer's flowers.... birds flock to feeders

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/7/2018 10:59:00 AM

Adorable poem AND picture!

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/1/2018 11:10:00 PM

Hi Sara, sounds like my cat Smokey, thank you for sharing and take care.....Vera

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2018 8:44:00 AM

Vera, Does Smokey have a hard time catching the Parrots ?..They would be a full meal for the cat.. Thanks for the visit ..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 1/1/2018 8:40:00 PM

Very cute and nice haiku! Thanks for sharing my dear Sara. Happy New Year to you and your family! Hugs!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2018 8:42:00 AM

DS, Thanks for the comment and New Year wishes..Sara >>I hope this is an awesome year for you....

Silent One

Date: 1/1/2018 10:59:00 AM

Interesting haiku Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2018 8:41:00 AM

SO, Thanks for dropping by..I hope that you got some ideas from it..Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/1/2018 8:37:00 AM

Fantastic haiku! Begs...what is next!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2018 8:41:00 AM

When I opened the door all the birds flew of course and the cat came running out from where it was hidden in the frozen dead plants of summer..LOL..She was waiting for an opportunity to pounce to have some fresh bird for breakfast and I blew it for her.Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2018 8:39:00 AM

Kim, There were about 50 birds around the feeders, on the ground, and up in the tree yesterday morning..I saw three get on the frozen bird bath and try to drink but could not so I filled a cup with very hot water to pour over the frozen so they could drink..