Hourglass

Hourglass…

My only hourglass is running out of sand.
For sure, there is nothing within Promised Land.
Stop for a second think; what is gone is gone.
Regret that youth never went as it was planned.

Upon which path did I come into this life?
Nothing easy came up for me in this strife.
I did not ask for this; I must return soon.
I need some courage, an unmerciful knife.

I am leaving, and my path is too oblique.
A thousand mysteries will add to mystique.
Where is my destination? Who is driving?
When I get there, I know it will be unique.


Half of this world to me was pain and half loss.
A lot of people I know act as my boss.
I want to fly and dance with swallows at dawn;
Or maybe talk to a man who was on the cross.

1/18/17   Haloo
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Zerlaut Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 11:45 PM
a very deeply felt poem, well wrote!
Salehi Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 4:37 AM
Thank you my friend..
Ogundare Avatar
March 18, 2017 at 4:00 PM
A deep write Pashang. Things might not go as planned, but eventually, everything will fall into its rightful place.
Salehi Avatar
March 19, 2017 at 2:30 AM
Indeed...
Duet Avatar
February 21, 2017 at 9:29 PM
Sad poem, Pashang. Very moving and deeply felt. Courage, my friend. Pray for courage. (By the way, you might want to insert the word, "the", in the last line right before the word, "man". Just a suggestion.)
Salehi Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 2:24 AM
Thank you for suggestion Carole.This is a Rubai, and in this style the meter, syllables must be perfect unlike free verse.
Maverick Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 2:23 AM
Hello Pashang, I chose this because of its title and its rubaiyat form.' So here I am with Jesus..' I can only say God exists and when or if you accept him, its between you and Him from there, we all have a journey, I am aware many horrific things have been done in relegion, from the Aztecs to the Roman cults to catholics and Anglican, I think 1 key is to be humble and not to seek a status with Him.' God bless.'
Salehi Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 11:39 AM
Thanks Joe, I will see you when I see you...
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 7:03 PM
Pashang this is a very thoughtful poem reflecting on your life path. I like that ending and dancing with swallows!
Salehi Avatar
February 5, 2017 at 11:31 PM
Thank you Andrea..
Murray Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 4:57 PM
After so much sadness, it is nice to see at the end you still have hope. At least I hope that is what you mean Pashang.
Salehi Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 1:41 PM
Jean, you're so wonderful....
George   Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 4:30 PM
I agree with Harry. Thank you for sharing, Pashang. Elaine
Salehi Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 5:41 PM
Thank you my dear...
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:23 AM
Powerful and profound, excellent poetry...
Salehi Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 5:40 PM
Thank you Harry, I'm glad that you liked it.....
Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 11:59 AM
- A powerful write, Pashang ... I feel a little sad - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Salehi Avatar
January 19, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Thanks Love
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