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Hourglass

Written: June 10th, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud ************************ Do I feel empty? Or am I becoming a void? Or am I amassing light to be thick? Shimmering hourglass embosoms paradoxes— emptiness and fullness, darkness and light. A sandy spot with winter asperity cinders, a vestige of the iterative nature of life, each grain of time trickling a wave, ebbing and flowing, forever shifting, undulating. Whatever twist, whatever spin, I sustain you in the din,  anchored on the ledge of chiming. In all scopes, the sand-clock is versatile, grain by grain, a vertical choir—counts— flux, looms as a flash of fearlessness, from ash, arises a phoenix, pristine slate.
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Hind Avatar
June 16, 2026 at 10:09 PM
deep imagery- this is powerful :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 1:58 PM
Lovely images, Sotto. It was clever of you to center your poem to resemble the hourglass. Congrats for your win
Goldsmith Avatar
June 14, 2026 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Hourglass" write/story. As a kid I loved to play with an hourglass. Have a blessed/fun day with your win as you go writing away..........
George Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 8:27 PM
"a vestige of the iterative nature of life, each grain of time trickling a wave, ebbing and flowing, forever shifting, undulating." What a masterful way of describing an hour glass. Through it, you fling certain thoughts related to life worth pondering. A beautiful composition.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 3:25 PM
a masterpiece in my opinion....your view of the hourglass is superb, filled with introspective wisdom. Wishing you well, Sara
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 10:56 AM
- Grains of sand flowing without stopping ... impossible to turn it around to start over ... a wonderful poem, Las :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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