Notes About The Poem

Hourglass

Life is like a big hourglass 

it will run its course. 

Live it to the fullest without 

remorse.

Time is active and constantly 

on the move. 

We’re given a certain amount, 

so be intentional and improve. 




Alexis Y.
03/26/2023

lifetimerhyme

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/2/2023 5:09:00 AM

Good Morning Alexis. What a lovely and soft message you leave us with reflections and thought. May your words be heard. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always (smile)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2023 8:09:00 AM

Definitely, we all need to improve in some way. I hope I can improve my attitude, thinking, and all my weaknesses at least a little every day. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/27/2023 5:27:00 AM

planning to put this to a photo I would love to send it to you, please soup mail me for my email

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/27/2023 1:37:00 AM

Wisely said, Alexis:)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/27/2023 12:14:00 AM

Words of wisdom Alexis, time is precious and we must not waste a second. Tom

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/26/2023 9:15:00 PM

Your poem says quite a lot, Alexis, and what it imparts is wisdom. Loved it! Best of wishes, Evelyn :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/26/2023 5:23:00 PM

Great ponts of wisdom . Excellent poem :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/26/2023 3:21:00 PM

Time is like sand in a giant hourglass; it runs out eventually. Alexis, you nailed it when you stated, "Enjoy life to the fullest." Wonderful concept.