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Hour of Shame

She heard her feet fall on the dirt. The echo caused her heart to hurt; and though she held her head up high, she chose her fate for love to lie. No shame could steal her pride away. Stern puritans would have her pay. Her sin she wore upon her chest. The scarlet A defined her best. This brave woman named Hester Prynne forgave herself of her past sin. Paraded ‘round town openly with babe in arms for all to see. Daughter named Pearl, a gift from God. She felt forgiven, strong yet flawed. The town became her own prison; the woods, her walls, absorbed love’s sin. Her choice to stay and not to run, she made that day in light of sun. She'd never give the elders power beyond penance of bridled hour. She wore her "A" dutifully, then laid with love eternally. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders For Giorgio's Iambic Verse - Recite and Analyze A Fictional Event, 2/15/15 *written in iambic tetrameter, couplet rhyme scheme. Event analyzed- When Hester Prynne is publically shamed and given her Scarlet Letter.

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Date: 3/2/2015 8:36:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful poem!
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Date: 2/27/2015 10:36:00 PM
Rhonda, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/24/2015 3:18:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Rhonda - hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:30:00 AM
Emotive write Rhonda,, wonderful expressions n a huge win! Big congrats!
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Date: 2/23/2015 7:15:00 PM
A very tragic event, Rhonda, and I was right there in your story-poem watching it unfold through your expressive words. Nicely done! Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/16/2015 8:10:00 AM
Astounding verse! It is so rhythmic and flowing and you told the story well
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Date: 2/15/2015 5:02:00 PM
How sad that things like that happened!! It was their shame, not hers! It was not their right to judge and condemn. Very expressive write, Rhonda. hugs // paul
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:51:00 PM
Well done Rhonda...love this story...hugs Tim
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:49:00 PM
Wonderful Rhonda. Good luck in the contest. 7:)
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Date: 2/15/2015 3:38:00 PM
A wonderful tribute Rhonda - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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