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Line Bitesize Contest No101 ~ February 22, 2025

In the hour of each golden dawn nature exposes her ambient light. She weaves pastel threads aloft as sunlight becomes a gifted artist painting the day as a gilded tapestry.

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Date: 2/25/2025 10:41:00 AM
Lin, it's beautiful as an image and as words. Smiles...they can't take this away from us while we live!
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:46:00 AM
It's all ours to appreciate, Duke. Thank you so much.
Date: 2/22/2025 5:55:00 PM
Wonderful poem to go with the picture. The imagery in your poem is excellent.
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:45:00 AM
Thank you very much, Oliver. I was mesmerized by the picture.
Date: 2/22/2025 2:20:00 PM
The gold of dawn is the prettiest time of day. I find it most remarkable when glowing on nature. Your poem is a sensory treasure.
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:45:00 AM
It really is, Hilda. I agree and thank you for such kind thoughts.
Date: 2/22/2025 1:59:00 PM
Nature paints some stunning masterpieces as do you with your words. Tom
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much, Tom.
Date: 2/22/2025 12:38:00 PM
So pretty!
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Date: 2/25/2025 11:44:00 AM
Thanks, Kim.

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