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Hour Glass

Hope is drowning in the hour glass and all the answers disagree. I thought I knew, I wish I’d asked. I lost my way reading maps like a novice out to sea. Hope is drowning in the hour glass. Sedated my ego and choked on laughs. Formulated an identity. I thought I knew, I wish I’d asked. Built it to watch it collapse - and ran away ignorantly. Hope is drowning in the hour glass. Beneath the rubble, a smoldering past And the cost of what was thought free. I thought I knew, I wish I’d asked. All the sweat burned to ash. My soul is a chimney. Hope is drowning in the hour glass. I thought I knew, I wish I’d asked.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 11:26:00 PM
very well penned
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