Hotter Than Fire

Hope fuels the desire that burns within your longing heart and soul. And yet, loneliness soon returns, levying a heartbreaking toll. When trickling tears douse passion's flame: Anxiety makes you nauseous. And as doubts manifest as shame: lust circumvents being cautious. Happiness morphs into teardrops within a world where wishes die. For the lying just never stops, and fledgling hearts need trust to fly. The moth and flame begin their waltz, yet courting death, she may expire. Enamored, she's blind to fire's faults: for desire burns, hotter than fire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 13, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Spagnola Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Such a beautifully, intriguing write with a lot of class Emile!....:), jill
Pinet Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Thanks Jill, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Sietesantos Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 10:35 AM
Emile, this is sizzling with passion and dripping with romantic emotions! Love it so much - it's a 7! BRAVO! Pandita
Pinet Avatar
November 16, 2015 at 11:44 AM
Thanks so much Pandita, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
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