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Hotel Hellifornia

I went on vacation to Hell, The hotel was hot, with a smell, And The Devil was rude, When I toyed with my food: He cooked all the dinners as well. For Carolyn’s Vacation contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/19/2015 4:01:00 AM
Love it ,,, Thanks for reading my Chocolate Covered Cherries :)
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Date: 10/21/2014 9:17:00 AM
Yes, the dear old roach hotel. Been there on symphony tours. Big kicks. Love, daver
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Date: 9/27/2014 5:06:00 PM
Enjoyed this humorous poem Jack. Having a rainy day so did some comments today. It is into fall and finished cleaning off the garden. Hope all is well with you my friend. love phyl
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Date: 8/20/2014 10:27:00 PM
Dear Jack: A very nice Hellava day! Nicely done dear "Jack in the Corner" -- Enjoyed this poem. All the best, Leon
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Date: 8/16/2014 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this amusing entry Jack. Limerick's are a real challenge for me.
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Date: 7/30/2014 4:52:00 PM
Love this one ~liza~
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Date: 7/30/2014 12:12:00 PM
Congrats on the win...
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Date: 7/29/2014 12:50:00 PM
Jack,, Sweet smiles to you, sweet smiles to all.. Congratulations, on making Carolyn's Vacation Humor contest list. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2014 8:16:00 AM
That's a great write Jack ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:39:00 AM
Hahah that is great! Well done winner Jack :)
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Date: 7/27/2014 6:15:00 AM
But I hooked up with a lot of old friends... Well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/27/2014 12:46:00 AM
Very funny and hilarious which makes one laugh not smile, Jack
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Date: 7/26/2014 9:05:00 PM
I laughed out loud.. Great play on words, congrats on your win Jack!
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Date: 7/26/2014 6:14:00 PM
Very witty, Jack; now what about visiting Heaven's Happy Return!! waiting for your next limerick!! Congrats on a merited win. // paul
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Date: 7/26/2014 4:10:00 PM
Great job, Jack. Glad to see you were a big winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/26/2014 1:46:00 PM
I LOVED yours, Jack. A well deserved win. BIG congrats (funny story, lately the login is not letting me on first time.It always says to do it over. Just now the login captcha was Sex, and it let me in right away. ahhaha)
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Date: 7/26/2014 1:33:00 PM
Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 7/26/2014 12:15:00 PM
Being a California girl, your title caught my attention........and you truly made me laugh !! (the devil made me do it !) lol ! Congrats to you !!
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Date: 7/26/2014 11:55:00 AM
Hehehehe! I really enjoyed reading this clever, humorous piece! Congratulations on a well-deserved great win!
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Date: 7/26/2014 11:33:00 AM
Dear Jack, I think I stayed at this hotel once too. Very funny! Congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/21/2014 5:30:00 AM
Hell-o, Jack! Ok that was pretty corny, me greeting you that way... but yup, I did enjoy reading this limerick of yours-- that's a pretty witty name of the hotel though-- now I got Hotel California playing in my mind....thank you for keeping is in our prayers-- aside from broken and damaged trees, my family and I are ok-- hoping that our trees recover soon, thanks again dear Jack!
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Date: 7/20/2014 7:42:00 PM
:D!!! witty witty :D!
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Date: 7/18/2014 7:38:00 PM
ha! this is a great limerick!
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Date: 7/18/2014 7:17:00 PM
Lol!.. Killer! Jack my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/18/2014 6:52:00 PM
The Devil's in the details. He love's it when humanity fails. So vacation where it's cooler. And support the other ruler. :) Tell satan the checks in the mail. Peace. :)
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