Line Gauthier Poet Sonnet

Hotdogs For Dinner

His lovely bride was no cook, tried she might
He labored on construction till the night
He worked up a heck of an appetite
Rushing on home, must have missed every light

Kicked off his boots as he held her so tight
Leisurely asked what’s for dinner tonight
He looked at her two hotdogs, what a sight
One’s for you, one’s for me, is that alright

Eyes so bright and smiling with much delight
The young newlyweds dined by candlelight
Gingerly nibbled to enjoy each bite
So she remembered their very special night

As she glanced far beyond in the moonlight
Fond memory, now young widow’s hindsight



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

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Timothy Mcguire July 12, 2018 at 12:01 AM I love this poem. Reminds me when I was a newlywed. She could not cook very well but I always loved the meal and the love put into it. Line Gauthier July 12, 2018 at 12:23 AM I'm so happy you found this poem, Timothy. It is special to me. I remember so vividly the young widow telling me her story.

Connie Marcum Wong October 31, 2017 at 6:01 PM Line, this is an excellent Monorhyme! A wonderful story with a tinge of humor until the sad ending. I loved it! : ) Line Gauthier October 31, 2017 at 7:10 PM Thank you for your visit, Connie. I appreciate your taking the time to leave me a lovely note.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 31, 2017 at 8:38 AM I was not expecting that end. Excellent pen :) xomo My best to you! Line Gauthier October 31, 2017 at 9:47 AM Hi Maureen, thanks so much for your visit and comment. Have an awesome week !!

Vijay Pandit October 31, 2017 at 7:54 AM That last line was quite a turn! Well written tale of first night with hot dogs for dinner--who wouldn't remember! Line Gauthier October 31, 2017 at 8:13 AM Hi Vijay, Thanks for your visit and especially for leaving me a comment. Warmest regards.

Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2017 at 7:53 AM Romance comes in all flavors, bringing the personalities of two hearts. Candlelight and hotdogs become a precious memory. <3 Line Gauthier October 31, 2017 at 8:12 AM Thanks for your visit and comment, Kim. Have a wonderful week.