'hot Water Bottle'

hot water bottle just a temporary cure until his return 29/05/2011... 22:00 *wishful thinking on my part* lol

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/2/2011 1:07:00 PM

oh just am loving this one Wilma... my hot water bottle sitting next to me on the hot beach is all red in the face from the sun..oh.. but what fun this is.. like your lovely poetry is to enjoy..

James Peranteau

Date: 5/30/2011 1:50:00 PM

Cute write dear poet,....love the warmth in this write ! *smiles* Have a great week Wilma...much love

James Foulk

Date: 5/30/2011 10:15:00 AM

a very clever piece you creative Wilma, but I use to love those hot water bottles. have seen one in a long time.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/30/2011 7:29:00 AM

oh shuckers! is it still raining over there??? who pray tell, are you waiting for?? hehehe. better keep that water hot though, refill, refill :) hugs to you :)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/30/2011 6:15:00 AM

hmmm .... never thought of leaving one of those in my will ..... Thanks Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2011 12:15:00 AM

ahhh, very clever one.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/29/2011 7:23:00 PM

I feel the pain...lol..enjoyed..BG

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/29/2011 4:28:00 PM

Must be chilly in Cape Town tonight lol May have to fly there and get a job as a Cab driver and maybe get a chance to warm you up lol...sweet write with much smiles...love u Michael