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'hot Water Bottle'

hot water bottle
just a temporary cure
until his return




29/05/2011... 22:00

*wishful thinking on my part* 
lol

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 2, 2011 at 1:07 PM

oh just am loving this one Wilma... my hot water bottle sitting next to me on the hot beach is all red in the face from the sun..oh.. but what fun this is.. like your lovely poetry is to enjoy..

James Peranteau

May 30, 2011 at 1:50 PM

Cute write dear poet,....love the warmth in this write ! *smiles* Have a great week Wilma...much love

James Foulk

May 30, 2011 at 10:15 AM

a very clever piece you creative Wilma, but I use to love those hot water bottles. have seen one in a long time.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 30, 2011 at 7:29 AM

oh shuckers! is it still raining over there??? who pray tell, are you waiting for?? hehehe. better keep that water hot though, refill, refill :) hugs to you :)

Robert A. Dufresne

May 30, 2011 at 6:15 AM

hmmm .... never thought of leaving one of those in my will ..... Thanks Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

May 30, 2011 at 12:15 AM

ahhh, very clever one.

Barbara Gorelick

May 29, 2011 at 7:23 PM

I feel the pain...lol..enjoyed..BG

Michael J. Falotico

May 29, 2011 at 4:28 PM

Must be chilly in Cape Town tonight lol May have to fly there and get a job as a Cab driver and maybe get a chance to warm you up lol...sweet write with much smiles...love u Michael