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gently a breeze stirs a scented satiation the ants arrived late ©6/23/2022

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Date: 6/27/2022 11:13:00 AM
A lovely senryu, imagery captured swell in brevity. Kudos! ^^^^^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~ Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too.
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Date: 6/26/2022 8:09:00 AM
Good senryu describing how an appealing scene can draw those little pests! Janice
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Date: 6/23/2022 2:30:00 PM
Great one John :)
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