David Kavanagh Poet Haiku

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Hot Phenomenan

hot phenomenon 

           ancient lava rings
     hexagonal shapes appear 
         molten rock anneals

         where titans battled 
     geometric footprints pave
         the giants causeway 
         

         

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06/04/23

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Jan Allison June 13, 2023 at 3:06 PM i especially love the second poem David i would love to visit the causeway one day:-) hugs Jan xx many congrats on your win:-) xx David Kavanagh June 13, 2023 at 3:25 PM As the bird flies you probably live nearer to Nth Antrim than I do, yeah it’s well worth the visit, but always better on a sunny day, cheers David

Lin Lane June 12, 2023 at 10:06 AM Hot rocks! You're always a winner, DK. Lin Lane June 12, 2023 at 12:01 PM The images you had accompanying your Haiku were so unique. David Kavanagh June 12, 2023 at 11:40 AM Hot rocks indeed Lin, imagine they start out as lava circles, and as they cook crack into hexagonal shapes, weird nature, cheers David

I Am Anaya June 12, 2023 at 9:27 AM Let me be the first to congratulate you on your win! David Kavanagh June 12, 2023 at 11:38 AM Thank you Anaya, I’m delighted with my placement, I must check out the results now, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar June 6, 2023 at 1:29 AM You tell but also you show. Not easy but you did well. Best for a win. David Kavanagh June 6, 2023 at 1:43 AM Thanks for the vote of confidence Victor, it can be quite tricky to flip these over, cheers David

Tom Cunningham June 5, 2023 at 10:08 AM Great contrasting haiku David, that's one on my bucket list. Tom David Kavanagh June 5, 2023 at 10:20 AM It’s a great spot Tom, and with the new Carrick-a-Rede rope bridge the views are even more spectacular, cheers David