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hot phenomenon ancient lava rings hexagonal shapes appear molten rock anneals where titans battled geometric footprints pave the giants causeway Show Don't Tell, Tell Don't Show Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dilly Dally Howmanysyllables 5/7/5 5/7/5 06/04/23

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/13/2023 3:06:00 PM

i especially love the second poem David i would love to visit the causeway one day:-) hugs Jan xx many congrats on your win:-) xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/13/2023 3:25:00 PM

As the bird flies you probably live nearer to Nth Antrim than I do, yeah it’s well worth the visit, but always better on a sunny day, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 6/12/2023 11:05:00 AM

Captures the essence of the contest perfectly David. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for taking the time to support this contest.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/12/2023 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Dilly, I’m delighted with your placement, I enjoyed writing for the contest, a little tricky but well worth the effort, cheers David

Lin Lane

Date: 6/12/2023 10:06:00 AM

Hot rocks! You're always a winner, DK.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/12/2023 12:01:00 PM

The images you had accompanying your Haiku were so unique.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/12/2023 11:40:00 AM

Hot rocks indeed Lin, imagine they start out as lava circles, and as they cook crack into hexagonal shapes, weird nature, cheers David

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/12/2023 9:27:00 AM

Let me be the first to congratulate you on your win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/12/2023 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Anaya, I’m delighted with my placement, I must check out the results now, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/6/2023 1:29:00 AM

You tell but also you show. Not easy but you did well. Best for a win.

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/6/2023 1:43:00 AM

Thanks for the vote of confidence Victor, it can be quite tricky to flip these over, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/5/2023 10:08:00 AM

Great contrasting haiku David, that's one on my bucket list. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/5/2023 10:20:00 AM

It’s a great spot Tom, and with the new Carrick-a-Rede rope bridge the views are even more spectacular, cheers David