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Hot Metal Love



Mei-ricka’s in love
Her heart burns like a hot pistol
She’s got a ruby ring on her second finger,
to signify her sacred vow to her main squeeze
Amended her desires twice, vowing to remain faithful;
every morning and every night, 
she promised to abide with her first love
Mei-ricka’s very much in love
Her lover is of such a high caliber pedigree
She loves the feel 
of his wide barrel-chest hair trigger touch — 
his cold, scuplted iron frame and hot lead ejection
Repeated heated moans
are lover cries which perforate the air
Their emptied bodies fall to the floor like spent shells
Mei-ricka’s forever in love
The residue of hot metal passion
falls like 
melted sulfur snowflakes in her hair
Her favorite aphrodisiac 
is a smoky, saltpeter mountain fragrance
blowing everywhere
Mei-ricka’s truly in love
She craves his smooth, silver skin love handles — 
his cold steely attention and hot lead affection
Mei-ricka is smitten in love,
his multi-orgasmic chamber charms
gives her so much amorous bang for the buck
It’s a hot metal love affair — 
so close range automatic 
Mei-ricka loves the throbbing, vibrating sensations
of her erotic lover’s explosive splatter ...
It’s a hot metal love affair — 
and she can’t gat get enough

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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