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Volcanic Eruption of the Soul, Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann, 6/23/2025

Rising on island, Mountain, with peaks of possibility, Valley lush and green. When my knees collapse, lightning and thunder - Call it butterflies. The palms warmed and cooled us, warned us, fooled us. Explosive, our love - Once conjoined, often drifting in the sea, Eyes leaping with fire. Hot Lava, Lover, Have we been here before? You’re smoking hot! Hearts of stone, lifting upwards, tears running, Drifting on riffraff. Outbreak of chortling might redirect winds. La la…ooh…la la. Sips of berries and pineapple; we share Icy tropical Attempts to cool things down; steam underfoot. Ebb and flow of raft, Seeking to poke embers - attentive ears. Hot Lava, Lover, Have we been here before? You’re smoking hot! Collapse of civilization, in grass Skirt, paradise shirt, Atomic timing sans wearing a watch. Heads buried in sand - Lips meeting in molten-red, not passive, Dirty and tender. Swimming in sweep of lava lake, suntan- Baked, gliding upwards, Climactic eruption, falling with love. Hot Lava, Lover, Have we been here before? You’re smoking hot! We ride the flume of volcanic weather, Can’t raise the tall man, Seek the insane chance of sane survival - Valiancy in strife. Man and wife seeking each other’s island - Pieces fit just right. Synchronic habitation, breathing room. Volcano’s, how old? In the end it shuts its mouth… a whisper Hot Lava, Lover, Have we been here before? You’re smoking hot!

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Date: 6/23/2025 1:39:00 PM
the title alone is hot, hot , hot!!! I think you will get a win with this kind of poetry, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 2:22:00 PM
Thank you :) I appreciate your support, my friend!
Date: 6/23/2025 11:48:00 AM
This is something else, a lot of something else's, all rich with captivating lines; an erotic wrap of titillating imagery - almost song like in my head. I believe, missy, that you penned a "Wow". Hot Lava Lover - almost a tongue twister and surely a pant's blister ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 1:10:00 PM
LOL! You crack me up, CayCay! Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 6/23/2025 11:37:00 AM
Excellent writing Kim! Great poem! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 6/23/2025 9:49:00 AM
Passion erupts like flaming lava. Very nicely penned
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Joe! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 6/23/2025 9:36:00 AM
Wow! Need a cool lemonade after reading this one. Great poetry! You get another FAV!! Absolutely relatable and perfect. Talent abounding. "Man and wife seeking each other’s island - Pieces fit just right." Purely wonderful!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Joe! Enjoy that lemonade.

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