Hot, Hot Lovin'

My wedding ring fell in the toilet
So I asked my wife if she'd boil it
It then burnt my hand
My own wedding band
For she thought that I asked her to broil it
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Murphy Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:49 AM
hi larry glad to see you still writing wonderful and funny poetry I need a while to catch up but i'm slowly but surely back have a great weekend faleshia
Rhinem Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:50 PM
Smile ~ Sounds as though perhaps someone either mis-understood or, maybe was a tad bit upset? Smile, You made me laugh with this write my friend ~ "Excellent;" for laughter is a very nice blessing, indeed!!! ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Your Loves," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Beautiful Evening &, Don't Drop That Ring;" Bye!:) ~
Scripca Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:38 PM
Haha, a good and funny one. Are you sure she misunderstood your request or you did something BAAAAADDDDD??? :)
Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 8:13 PM
Nice humorous haiku, as always, Larry
Taylor Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:31 PM
Funny write, my friend. LOL Have a good weekend. Thanks for your comments. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:28 PM
GEEZ Larry hope that mistake does not happen to me and Ron..HAHAHA.. so funny.. enjoyed .. a real treat tonight.. with luv..happy weekend..
Roberts Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:16 PM
cute one Larry, much enjoyed
Culverhouse Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 6:35 PM
funny...I dropped my ring in the sink and my honey had to rescue it.
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