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slithering sizzle stalks scorching Sahara sands sidewinders dancing John G. Lawless 5/24/2016

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Date: 5/30/2016 11:25:00 AM
Great write, beautiful lines. A well deserved 7
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:37:00 PM
fabulous alliteration love the haiku John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/24/2016 3:18:00 PM
Powerful imagery.
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Date: 5/24/2016 12:56:00 PM
I can see it! Wow!
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