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Hot Fudge Sundae

MUST BE THE WEATHER Must be the weather I'm floating on air Nothing to distress me No worries no cares Life's a big hoot Fun stuff nonstop A hot fudge sundae With a cherry on top Some may say “Man, get real” Here's what I tell 'em It's all how you feel About life and it's trials They're only a test So hang in there people Show 'em your best I'll sum this thing up With this bit of advice If you feel like chuckling Never think twice @Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/7/2017 11:35:00 PM

Great sum-up at the end there. There's nothing better than pure, uninhibited laughter. Plunge into a shower of giggles! Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2017 6:53:00 AM

"A shower of giggles" Wish I had said that!!! LOL xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 1:34:00 PM

love it..xox~LINDA

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2012 1:42:00 PM

Hey Ho, PD, better known as Linda! Linda was the name of my first wife who passed away in 1999. Glad you enjoyed my hot fudge sundae! Love and big hugs, Jack

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/31/2012 9:24:00 PM

This read with joy all down the page !! Nice !!

Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2012 4:59:00 AM

A great big thank you, Debra, for your kind words... love and hugs!

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/31/2012 2:34:00 PM

A nice and breezy one here Jack...we all need to do that sometimes, just let go and have fun! Very nice. One love. Joy Wells

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 2:42:00 PM

Thanks for your sweetness, Joy! Love and big hugs, Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2012 12:35:00 PM

you have a very GOOD attitude, and you will live long for it!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 12:48:00 PM

I already lived long! LOL I'm good for another twenty, you think! Hmmm! Love, Jack

Cindy Cayton

Date: 8/31/2012 11:40:00 AM

I love this!!! the ryme and meter is perfect, was almost tapping my foot!!! Just loved the simple word usage, brought together with a masterful pen, take care and God bless you, with love, Cindy Lu

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 12:46:00 PM

You are very kind my dear Cindy Lu! Thanks oodles! Love and warm wishes, Jack

Daver Austin

Date: 8/31/2012 10:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading my stuff, Jack. Hooray! A sense of humor. Yep! Got a chuckle out of this one. Love, daver

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 10:42:00 AM

Hey reading each other's stuff is what makes it work! Many thanks my friend... Jack

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/31/2012 10:08:00 AM

the imagery is both refreshing and alive, jack... live life to the fullest like hot fudge!... enjoyed your wonderful stuff!..:) huggs!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 10:14:00 AM

Wow! Thanks a bunch my friend for your kind words... love and hugs, Jack

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/31/2012 9:08:00 AM

This reminds me of the late Spencer Tracy in one of his last films "It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad, World". Good write.

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 9:12:00 AM

Thanks my friend... have a great day! Jack

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/31/2012 8:37:00 AM

This is a clever little write Jack! I really enjoyed your fun loving poem that you have written! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 8:42:00 AM

WOWSERS! Nice words of encouragement my friend... thanks a bunch! Jack