Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Hot Fudge Sundae

MUST BE THE WEATHER

Must be the weather
I'm floating on air
Nothing to distress me
No worries no cares

Life's a big hoot
Fun stuff nonstop
A hot fudge sundae
With a cherry on top

Some may say
“Man, get real”
Here's what I tell 'em
It's all how you feel

About life and it's trials
They're only a test
So hang in there people
Show 'em your best

I'll sum this thing up
With this bit of advice
If you feel like chuckling
Never think twice

@Jack Ellison 2012

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Laura Breidenthal September 7, 2017 at 11:35 PM Great sum-up at the end there. There's nothing better than pure, uninhibited laughter. Plunge into a shower of giggles! Always, Laura Jack Ellison September 8, 2017 at 6:53 AM "A shower of giggles" Wish I had said that!!! LOL xxx

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2012 at 1:34 PM love it..xox~LINDA Jack Ellison September 1, 2012 at 1:42 PM Hey Ho, PD, better known as Linda! Linda was the name of my first wife who passed away in 1999. Glad you enjoyed my hot fudge sundae! Love and big hugs, Jack

Debra Squyres August 31, 2012 at 9:24 PM This read with joy all down the page !! Nice !! Jack Ellison September 1, 2012 at 4:59 AM A great big thank you, Debra, for your kind words... love and hugs!

Joy Wellington August 31, 2012 at 2:34 PM A nice and breezy one here Jack...we all need to do that sometimes, just let go and have fun! Very nice. One love. Joy Wells Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 2:42 PM Thanks for your sweetness, Joy! Love and big hugs, Jack

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2012 at 12:35 PM you have a very GOOD attitude, and you will live long for it!!! Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 12:48 PM I already lived long! LOL I'm good for another twenty, you think! Hmmm! Love, Jack

Cindy Cayton August 31, 2012 at 11:40 AM I love this!!! the ryme and meter is perfect, was almost tapping my foot!!! Just loved the simple word usage, brought together with a masterful pen, take care and God bless you, with love, Cindy Lu Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 12:46 PM You are very kind my dear Cindy Lu! Thanks oodles! Love and warm wishes, Jack

Daver Austin August 31, 2012 at 10:27 AM Thanks for reading my stuff, Jack. Hooray! A sense of humor. Yep! Got a chuckle out of this one. Love, daver Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 10:42 AM Hey reading each other's stuff is what makes it work! Many thanks my friend... Jack

Nette Onclaud August 31, 2012 at 10:08 AM the imagery is both refreshing and alive, jack... live life to the fullest like hot fudge!... enjoyed your wonderful stuff!..:) huggs! Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 10:14 AM Wow! Thanks a bunch my friend for your kind words... love and hugs, Jack

Robert Pettit August 31, 2012 at 9:08 AM This reminds me of the late Spencer Tracy in one of his last films "It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad, World". Good write. Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 9:12 AM Thanks my friend... have a great day! Jack

Russell Sivey August 31, 2012 at 8:37 AM This is a clever little write Jack! I really enjoyed your fun loving poem that you have written! Wonderful piece, Great Work!! Jack Ellison August 31, 2012 at 8:42 AM WOWSERS! Nice words of encouragement my friend... thanks a bunch! Jack