Hot Fudge Sundae

MUST BE THE WEATHER

Must be the weather
I'm floating on air
Nothing to distress me
No worries no cares

Life's a big hoot
Fun stuff nonstop
A hot fudge sundae
With a cherry on top

Some may say
“Man, get real”
Here's what I tell 'em
It's all how you feel

About life and it's trials
They're only a test
So hang in there people
Show 'em your best

I'll sum this thing up
With this bit of advice
If you feel like chuckling
Never think twice

@Jack Ellison 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/7/2017 11:35:00 PM
Great sum-up at the end there. There's nothing better than pure, uninhibited laughter. Plunge into a shower of giggles! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/8/2017 6:53:00 AM
"A shower of giggles" Wish I had said that!!! LOL xxx
Date: 9/1/2012 1:34:00 PM
love it..xox~LINDA
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2012 1:42:00 PM
Hey Ho, PD, better known as Linda! Linda was the name of my first wife who passed away in 1999. Glad you enjoyed my hot fudge sundae! Love and big hugs, Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 9:24:00 PM
This read with joy all down the page !! Nice !!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2012 4:59:00 AM
A great big thank you, Debra, for your kind words... love and hugs!
Date: 8/31/2012 2:34:00 PM
A nice and breezy one here Jack...we all need to do that sometimes, just let go and have fun! Very nice. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/31/2012 2:42:00 PM
Thanks for your sweetness, Joy! Love and big hugs, Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 12:35:00 PM
you have a very GOOD attitude, and you will live long for it!!!
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:48:00 PM
I already lived long! LOL I'm good for another twenty, you think! Hmmm! Love, Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 11:40:00 AM
I love this!!! the ryme and meter is perfect, was almost tapping my foot!!! Just loved the simple word usage, brought together with a masterful pen, take care and God bless you, with love, Cindy Lu
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Date: 8/31/2012 12:46:00 PM
You are very kind my dear Cindy Lu! Thanks oodles! Love and warm wishes, Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 10:27:00 AM
Thanks for reading my stuff, Jack. Hooray! A sense of humor. Yep! Got a chuckle out of this one. Love, daver
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Date: 8/31/2012 10:42:00 AM
Hey reading each other's stuff is what makes it work! Many thanks my friend... Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 10:08:00 AM
the imagery is both refreshing and alive, jack... live life to the fullest like hot fudge!... enjoyed your wonderful stuff!..:) huggs!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 10:14:00 AM
Wow! Thanks a bunch my friend for your kind words... love and hugs, Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 9:08:00 AM
This reminds me of the late Spencer Tracy in one of his last films "It's a Mad, Mad, Mad, Mad, World". Good write.
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Date: 8/31/2012 9:12:00 AM
Thanks my friend... have a great day! Jack
Date: 8/31/2012 8:37:00 AM
This is a clever little write Jack! I really enjoyed your fun loving poem that you have written! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/31/2012 8:42:00 AM
WOWSERS! Nice words of encouragement my friend... thanks a bunch! Jack
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