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Hot Foot Beach Shuffle

Georgy ran as Georgy can Across the hot white shifting sand, His hot foot shuffle Caused such a kerfuffle, Kicking sand up as he ran.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/3/2015 10:30:00 AM
Ahhh... He knows that it's cooler underneath... LOL... I always feel right there when you write. You never fail me.
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Date: 5/31/2015 11:44:00 PM
this is cute. Hope you will visit me again because when I have more time, I hope to see a lot more of your limericks and when I don't hear back from poets, the names leave my mind!!!
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John Williams
Date: 6/2/2015 2:20:00 AM
Yes Andrea, will visit soon, just a lot of work on at the moment Thanks for your comment---kind regards----John

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