Hot Day

A steady hum vibrating one constant low
Surrounding me in tiny hummingbird beats
The two giant fans warm and hot breezes blow

The fuzzy sound vibrates on pulsed in it’s drones
All vision blurs dimly in dark shadowed heat
A steady hum vibrating one constant low

The yellow window’s shade drawn down indigo
Gaze at it’s outline, with my hands on my feet
The two giant fans warm and hot breezes blow

My round Papasan chair of plush wicker holds
My languid form as I relax there complete
A steady hum vibrating one constant low

Within the dark, my lap cat’s bright green eyes glow
I’m clothed only in my silhouette’s repeat
The two giant fans warm and hot breezes blow

Reflect in beta waves of calm peace I know
On blue walls, my fairy outline shifts and beats
A steady hum vibrating one constant low
The two giant fans warm and hot breezes blow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 5/30/2009 7:05:00 AM
MASTERFUL VILLANELLE, Seephaine. Lainie
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Date: 5/27/2009 5:36:00 AM
Excellent ... congratulations on your stellar creative effort, may you be featured again many more times. Bravo
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Date: 5/26/2009 9:39:00 AM
Congrats once again as you are being honoured once again with another feature of the week. We can’t get this kind of well deserved honour else where other than poetrysoup. Keep writing, you are a great poet… Leke
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Stephie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 2:57:00 PM
Congrats Stephie on your winning villanelle being featured again. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 1:53:00 AM
Congratulatins on your featured write. More power and success. Ernilando
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Date: 5/24/2009 4:50:00 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Interesting use of imagery. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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