Hot Damn

Retirement, aw yes, looked forward to this time
A cottage on the beach, that would have been fine
But instead here I am
With you guys, hot damn!
Greatest friends I've ever had, so sweet and so kind


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Carol Eastman

April 19, 2015 at 12:56 PM

Sweet and Kind!... You certainly don't have Dragon on your mind!... Or Grandpa Troll who scolds us sooo... But sweet little old me... Yea, I must be the one you did find... And I'm so very modest too... Can't be denied...

Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 3:22 PM

You my dear Carol are the most loyal and sweetest friend I have here on The Soup! Love ya... Jacko xxx

Laura Breidenthal

April 19, 2015 at 1:59 AM

Love this! You are just a charmer, aren't you? Another loving limerick from the funniest guy on Poetrysoup! Lots of love sending your way!~Always, Laura

Jack Ellison

April 19, 2015 at 7:12 AM

Okay before I begin, gotta tell ya you are something so so special to me, my dear sweet Laura! You have melted this old guy's heart! Don't know how thank you enough or express the love I feel for you sweet lady! Not sure I deserve all your kind words but I stashing them alway in a special part of my heart!!! Love, Jack xxx

Nette Onclaud

April 18, 2015 at 4:36 PM

i always get a kick fro your witty pieces, jack.. amazing!.. huggs

Jack Ellison

April 18, 2015 at 4:46 PM

Thank you my dear sweet Nette! You are ALWAYS so kind! Big huggeroonies, Jack xxx

Viv Wigley

April 18, 2015 at 8:07 AM

You've got to admit, Jack- we have impeccable taste :). Viv

Jack Ellison

April 18, 2015 at 8:29 AM

Absolutely... LOL Nicest bunch I ever did meet! Cheers!

John Williams

April 18, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Hello Jack, What a lovely recognition of your friends on Poetry Soup. If you get it maybe you can invite us all to your beach house, but, I think you better buy a big one. Well written and thoughtful...John....PS: can i bring my kangaroo when i come

Jack Ellison

April 18, 2015 at 8:28 AM

Love you to bring your kangaroo... never seen one up close! Come on over, my friend!