Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Hot Damn

Retirement, aw yes, looked forward to this time
A cottage on the beach, that would have been fine
But instead here I am
Writing poetry, hot damn!
Met some really great poets, so sweet and so kind

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Robert Pettit January 31, 2021 at 1:06 PM I had to check this one out because I submitted something with the same title a while ago. My subject matter wasn't the same as yours, but this is very humorous, and I liked it. Jack Ellison January 31, 2021 at 2:12 PM Thank you Robert! Was a graphic designer and retired at 75... couldn't retire, loved my chosen occupation! Cheers my friend!

Sand Blown January 31, 2021 at 12:47 PM ...was looking to get "the heck out of the city"....got it : ) stans sand Jack Ellison January 31, 2021 at 2:08 PM So you live a the country! I live in the semi-country! City folks are all out to screw their fellow man! Cheers!

Tom Cunningham January 31, 2021 at 9:21 AM Lol, we were heading for the coast but ended up in a small country town. Jack Ellison January 31, 2021 at 9:25 AM Still connected to the computer?