Panagiota Romios Poet Other

Hot Crossed Legs

 

A handsome stud passes me on the street
He winks, I blush, he stares at my cute feet!
                       WOOHOO

Next, a shirtless man, in the noonday sun.
I nearly melt, like a melting, cinnamon bun.     
                       WOOHOO


                        1/10/2023



                         ~ADDENDA~
Poetic Form is the Dixdeux, an alternative form of Haiku.
Developed in 1970.

Syllabic, with 10 syllables per line for two lines, followed 
by two syllables.
Unrhymed!
Has a title, unlike traditional Haiku.

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Eve Roper January 15, 2023 at 9:11 AM love it, especially the second verse. WOOHOO!! Panagiota Romios January 17, 2023 at 7:11 AM You are funny, Eve. The cinnamon bun, Panagiota

Elena Eagle January 12, 2023 at 8:21 PM So wonderful! Very creative piece that I really liked. Panagiota Romios January 13, 2023 at 12:33 AM This was really fun to create. Thank you for the vist Panagiota,

Joseph P. DiMino January 12, 2023 at 1:12 PM Passion, the cinnamon of life; make a dance-card and choose them both. Fun read! Panagiota Romios January 12, 2023 at 1:30 PM Great comment. Senseless to write about things that really matter in life. I gave up on that here. Just be bland or funny. Otherwise, I am up for attack. Fed up with attacks, so..,why write about reality? I don’t like writing inane poetry. So the things I care about are in the garbage can. I surrendered to the absurd and meaningless. I don’t know where PS went. The PS I once knew…….has vanished and my best friends with it. Sadly, Panagiota

Darlene De Beaulieu January 11, 2023 at 11:37 AM Hello Panagiota, so which one did you choose? Just wondering. Hugs Darlene/ xxx Darlene De Beaulieu January 12, 2023 at 4:38 AM Hello Panagiota, oh, that is a good choice. Hugs xxx./Darlene,Enjoy your day. Panagiota Romios January 11, 2023 at 4:37 PM Darlene, I think it was the shirtless one! ))) Hope h you have a perfect day. Panagiota

Gershon Wolf January 10, 2023 at 7:15 PM Woohoo! This is really cute, P! ~ Hot Crossed Buns Gershon Wolf January 11, 2023 at 7:05 PM Buns came from the cinnamon. Panagiota Romios January 10, 2023 at 10:00 PM ROFLMAO. Where did the buns come from, Title says.. Legs ))) Panagiota