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Hot Blooded

Smack down heat gives pavement a warm buzz of groggy For a puppy who joyfully licks a lemon popsicle held like a wand By a caring boy with a warm buzz of rebel. Composed July 27, 2020

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/30/2020 4:32:00 AM

I love the image this conjures, a warm buzz indeed. Reminding me delightfully of my own rebel nights, returning home from the bar sharing a poutine with my canine companion ;), xomo

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/6/2020 1:26:00 PM

Thanks very much. Street scenes are often a source of inspiration. Love your short sharp pieces enormously. Best wishes Brian

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:29:00 PM

Brian, congratulations on your win in my 4 line contest _Constance

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/29/2020 8:53:00 PM

Thank you Constance. I liked the rules you set for a 4 line structure. You gave us free range to choose a subject as well. Much appreciation. Sincere good wishes, Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2020 1:46:00 PM

how cute this is!!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/29/2020 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. The little boy knows the pup shouldn't have sugar, but on a hot day the rebel wins. As does the puppy. Best wishes Brian

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/28/2020 6:15:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Brian.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/29/2020 3:06:00 PM

Hello Line Yes the scene was an actual sidewalk bit of charity (I viewed) to an overheated pup. I had to write a small tribute to boy and dog. Thank you for your comment. Brian

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 1:38:00 PM

Such a tender and beautiful muse Brian. Congratulations on your win!

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/29/2020 3:08:00 PM

Thank you Aditi. It is startling what a small poignant scene can inspire. I may write a longer piece to the image. Best wishes Brian

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/28/2020 2:46:00 AM

- Four great lines ... congratulations on your win, Brian :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Sambourne
Date: 7/29/2020 3:10:00 PM

I appreciate your thoughtful words Anne-Lise. Our hot hot summer invites immediate relief even for our valued canine friends. Be well. Stay cool. Brian