Hot Babe

a fireworks
exploding in the sky
hot sun
dazzling beautiful
looking into 
your eyes
 
you captured me
like a fire 
it radiates you
the warmth inside 
a spark 
picked up 

sharing my warmth
electrically divine
for me 
you are 
a work of art
inner vision
masterpiece

in leaving oneself 
wanting more,
a heart on fire 
burning with desire,
for the one 
burning hot
like you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Carroll Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 5:49 AM
Hi Liam, Charming write..Nicely done my friend.. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 6:41 PM
THANK YOU MY GOOD FRIEND BEAUTIFUL COMMENT KEN DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Mehta Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 12:52 AM
Beautiful romantic yearning for love, liam
Mcdaid Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:59 PM
THANK YOU KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Chircop Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 10:53 PM
This captures the essence of yearning desire ..Beautiful : ) Magnifique!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:05 PM
YOUR COMMENT CAPTURES BEAUTIFUL MY FRIEND I THANK YOU DEARLY CHARMAINE HEARTFELT APPRECIATED HAVE A BLESSED DAY
Rain Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 9:36 AM
you have become my "Picasso " or John Lennon " I am really in love with the words .
Mcdaid Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 7:08 PM
DAZZLING BEAUTIFUL COMMENT YVETTE I PASS A SMILE THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED
A   Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 8:49 AM
liam, lovely write.... deep...thanks for the nice comment on my latest...Linda
Mcdaid Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 7:06 PM
LINDA THE PLEASURE IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL COMMENT THANK YOU DEARLY DEEPLY APPRECIATED
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