Janice Canerdy Poet Triolet

Hot and Cold

Hell hath no fury like a MAN scorned!   The poet
	                                              

Oblivious she seems to me
in spite of all my manly charm.
How she resists, I just can't see.
Oblivious she seems to me.
Now more persistent I will be.
Rejection causes great alarm!
Oblivious she seems to me
in spite of all my manly charm.

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Michelle Faulkner January 24, 2025 at 12:16 PM So true of the oh so fragile male ego, definately should be a winner! (also the captcha code is HAH)!

Jan Allison January 23, 2025 at 9:58 AM you certainly made me laugh out loud with this gem Janice! hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 17, 2025 at 2:20 PM Good one on the theme, Janice.

Ilene Bauer January 17, 2025 at 11:30 AM Ha! Made me laugh, Janice!

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2025 at 2:18 AM Good one, Janice. It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Sara K