Sara Kendrick Poet Shape

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Hot Air

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Hot air rises
Balloon flies high above
In my imaginary flight today
Dreams come true when mind set
Let's leave this earth's dismal scene
Freedom to follow currents anywhere
Freedom, if only for a few hours
It could have problems though
Current way too swift
Gas run out too fast
Big hole, pow
\      |         /
___________  
 _________
  \    |        / 
No where
To land
Softly
But not
Today

Written: April 21, 2023
For: Brian

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Suzanne Delaney April 25, 2023 at 5:04 AM Congratulations Sara: This is so clever. I know that feeling of trepidation as I have looked over that fragile basket at a mile high. It was a perfect day though and our memorable 23rd Wedding Anniversary spree, SuZ Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 7:52 AM Glad that you took the risk and went up, up and away!! I know that will always be a memorable anniversary. Thanks for sharing your story and for dropping by my page. Sara

Brian Sambourne April 24, 2023 at 7:04 PM Delightful in design and wording! A grand poem to escape with on this gray rainy April day. Congratulations! Be well. Sincerely, Brian Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 3:51 AM Thank you, Brian, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the nice review of my work, may the sun return to your area of the world. Sara

Sotto Poet April 24, 2023 at 4:22 PM Magnificent form and writing, Sara, Best of luck to you in the contest! Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 3:49 AM Why, thank you, Brian. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Alexis Y. April 24, 2023 at 2:06 PM WoW! Sara, You did very with the shape form. I’m sure it was difficult but you made it look easy. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis Sara Kendrick April 25, 2023 at 4:46 AM Alexis, thank you for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

David Drowley April 23, 2023 at 12:57 PM Congratulations Sara. Very soaring creativity. Sara Kendrick April 23, 2023 at 1:59 PM I like your creative comments. Way to go. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Joanna Daniel April 23, 2023 at 9:19 AM Wonderful shape and poem, Sara, congratulations:) Sara Kendrick April 23, 2023 at 10:43 AM Thank you, Joanna. I appreciate the visit and taking time to write a review of my work. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos April 23, 2023 at 8:13 AM Sara what a handsome creative vivid write so spot on as to what it offers to its passengers, a mind blowing aerial view of as far as the eye can see . I am not brave enough to chance it, but it sounds wonderful as you describe -" only no where to land" ouch! Hope you are well hugs blessings Jennifer. Sara Kendrick April 23, 2023 at 10:40 AM Yes, the part about the different problems was scary just to let us know that nowhere is there a place or thing that will eliminate all of life's problems. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Gary Radice April 23, 2023 at 2:45 AM You've done a great job with the message and pictorially Sara. We were lucky enough to go on a balloon trip in Florida..(A pick up car from the flight company chased us below as it didn't know where we were going to land which was a little off putting) We kept faith in the guy in charge. You use the word 'freedom'..Yes! That was the feeling we got. Congratulations on your podium place. Cheers - Gary Sara Kendrick April 23, 2023 at 3:56 AM Gary, I am glad that you got to go on a Hot Air Balloon ride. I am glad that it was nice, though a little scary and that you had a feeling of freedom. Thanks for letting me know that I had the podium place. I am honored that it would get that. Your visits always encourage. Sara

Valsa George April 22, 2023 at 11:38 PM Great pictorial representation of the balloon. Congratulations Sara on your win. Sara Kendrick April 23, 2023 at 1:55 AM Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kelly Deschler April 22, 2023 at 10:10 AM I've always wondered what the view was like from up there, but never had the courage to find out for myself... This is a very creative poem, Sara, and it looks exactly like a hot air balloon! Excellent work! Sara Kendrick April 22, 2023 at 1:29 PM Why, thank you, Kelly. I have not been up there in a hot air balloon either. I have been up in several different kinds of air motorized vehicles though a very long time ago. Your visits are so encouraging. Sara

Gershon Wolf April 21, 2023 at 3:17 PM I admire you for your talent, Sara. For me, something like this shape-poem is simply a dream. Very nice! ~ A Lotta Hot-Air Sara Kendrick April 22, 2023 at 4:53 AM Gershon, you can do it. You just don't know that you can. Look up format for shaped poems online and you might fine one you can do. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Sam Kauffman April 21, 2023 at 11:53 AM Delightful Sara and not full of hot air!!! Blessings! Sara Kendrick April 21, 2023 at 1:30 PM Maybe just a little bit filled with hot air. LOL. Thank you, Sam, for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara

Heidi Sands April 21, 2023 at 10:28 AM Great poem Sara :) Sara Kendrick April 21, 2023 at 1:27 PM I am so delighted that you think it is great. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen April 21, 2023 at 9:11 AM - Love it, Sara - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs Sara Kendrick April 21, 2023 at 1:23 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise. Your visits are always uplifting. SK

Beryl Edmonds April 21, 2023 at 9:10 AM A marvellous Shape poem Sara, well done you… Belle Sara Kendrick April 21, 2023 at 1:07 PM Thank you, Belle, for your kind review of my work. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara