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. Hot air rises Balloon flies high above In my imaginary flight today Dreams come true when mind set Let's leave this earth's dismal scene Freedom to follow currents anywhere Freedom, if only for a few hours It could have problems though Current way too swift Gas run out too fast Big hole, pow \ | / ___________ _________ \ | / No where To land Softly But not Today Written: April 21, 2023 For: Brian

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/25/2023 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations Sara: This is so clever. I know that feeling of trepidation as I have looked over that fragile basket at a mile high. It was a perfect day though and our memorable 23rd Wedding Anniversary spree, SuZ

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2023 7:52:00 AM

Glad that you took the risk and went up, up and away!! I know that will always be a memorable anniversary. Thanks for sharing your story and for dropping by my page. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/24/2023 7:04:00 PM

Delightful in design and wording! A grand poem to escape with on this gray rainy April day. Congratulations! Be well. Sincerely, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2023 3:51:00 AM

Thank you, Brian, for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the nice review of my work, may the sun return to your area of the world. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/24/2023 4:22:00 PM

Magnificent form and writing, Sara, Best of luck to you in the contest!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2023 3:49:00 AM

Why, thank you, Brian. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/24/2023 2:06:00 PM

WoW! Sara, You did very with the shape form. I’m sure it was difficult but you made it look easy. Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/25/2023 4:46:00 AM

Alexis, thank you for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

David Drowley

Date: 4/23/2023 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations Sara. Very soaring creativity.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2023 1:59:00 PM

I like your creative comments. Way to go. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2023 9:19:00 AM

Wonderful shape and poem, Sara, congratulations:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2023 10:43:00 AM

Thank you, Joanna. I appreciate the visit and taking time to write a review of my work. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/23/2023 8:13:00 AM

Sara what a handsome creative vivid write so spot on as to what it offers to its passengers, a mind blowing aerial view of as far as the eye can see . I am not brave enough to chance it, but it sounds wonderful as you describe -" only no where to land" ouch! Hope you are well hugs blessings Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2023 10:40:00 AM

Yes, the part about the different problems was scary just to let us know that nowhere is there a place or thing that will eliminate all of life's problems. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Gary Radice

Date: 4/23/2023 2:45:00 AM

You've done a great job with the message and pictorially Sara. We were lucky enough to go on a balloon trip in Florida..(A pick up car from the flight company chased us below as it didn't know where we were going to land which was a little off putting) We kept faith in the guy in charge. You use the word 'freedom'..Yes! That was the feeling we got. Congratulations on your podium place. Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2023 3:56:00 AM

Gary, I am glad that you got to go on a Hot Air Balloon ride. I am glad that it was nice, though a little scary and that you had a feeling of freedom. Thanks for letting me know that I had the podium place. I am honored that it would get that. Your visits always encourage. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 4/22/2023 11:38:00 PM

Great pictorial representation of the balloon. Congratulations Sara on your win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/23/2023 1:55:00 AM

Why, thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/22/2023 10:10:00 AM

I've always wondered what the view was like from up there, but never had the courage to find out for myself... This is a very creative poem, Sara, and it looks exactly like a hot air balloon! Excellent work!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/22/2023 1:29:00 PM

Why, thank you, Kelly. I have not been up there in a hot air balloon either. I have been up in several different kinds of air motorized vehicles though a very long time ago. Your visits are so encouraging. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/21/2023 3:17:00 PM

I admire you for your talent, Sara. For me, something like this shape-poem is simply a dream. Very nice! ~ A Lotta Hot-Air

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/22/2023 4:53:00 AM

Gershon, you can do it. You just don't know that you can. Look up format for shaped poems online and you might fine one you can do. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/21/2023 11:53:00 AM

Delightful Sara and not full of hot air!!! Blessings!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/21/2023 1:30:00 PM

Maybe just a little bit filled with hot air. LOL. Thank you, Sam, for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara