Abe Lopez Poet Epulaeryu

Hostess Twinkies

.     The yellow cream filled twinkie
               A frozen delight,
        Try eating it nice and cold;
             Tongue enveloping
               Tonsil tackling
                Throat filling
                    Cream!





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{throw them in the freezer before you eat them}


inspired by:

sweet treat contest (Laura Mckenzie)

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James Fraser September 14, 2009 at 12:42 PM Yummy, yummy Abe>>James

Tyesha Ehigiator April 7, 2009 at 5:50 PM Sounds Devilishly yummy, I love twinkies but never had em frozen, might have to give it a try..Great Epulaeryu...GB Always, Tyesha

Laurie Ginn April 2, 2009 at 5:37 PM Okay I hate twinkies but I can already tell Im going to buy a stupid box of them. Hey have you ever tried one deep fried? Seriously can't believe frozen sponge cake is going to be good.

Danielle Moreno April 1, 2009 at 6:09 PM YUMMY WRITE ABE, GOOD LUCK................DM

Charmaine Chircop March 31, 2009 at 3:59 PM yummy,i just need to try it out,sounds delicious

Steve Edmonds March 29, 2009 at 9:59 AM Mouth watering lines. Nice job and good luck.

Chris Goombi March 28, 2009 at 11:33 PM I like the method, I'm going to have to try this. Great job.

Chris Yarnell March 27, 2009 at 12:11 PM I LOVE EATING TWINKIES TOO,NICE WRITE

Tyler Martin March 27, 2009 at 2:55 AM Twinkies are the bomb, you wrote a great poem. I hope you win something. Tyler

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 26, 2009 at 1:50 PM Thanks for you comment on my Pisces write. Encouragement is always appreciated. I have entered it into the contest as you suggested. I also entered the food Epulaeryu contest. I must admit, I'm a little jealous of yours....It made me want twinkies right now!!! Great job!

James Marshall Goff March 26, 2009 at 9:34 AM los of fun, Abe! good job! thanks for comments, Jim

Carolyn Devonshire March 25, 2009 at 9:01 PM Yummy, Abe!

Christina Vasquez March 25, 2009 at 4:22 PM Lol.....you have me wanting to eat one haha....great job and good luck in the contest

Christopher Higgins March 25, 2009 at 4:11 PM The twinkies have it brother and so does this piece.. best wishes in the contest.

Belinda Parish March 25, 2009 at 3:27 PM Gotta love the Twinkies...lol. Great write!

Elizabeth Neal March 25, 2009 at 2:14 PM Nice equlaeryu, you must like twinkies. I don't really care for them, but there is a lot of people I know that does like them. Good job keep it up. Love Elizabeth

Savannah Rose Harper March 25, 2009 at 11:39 AM Great "taste"

Raul Moreno March 25, 2009 at 11:23 AM Mmm...delicious write Abe...Raul

Darleen Bilyeu March 25, 2009 at 11:10 AM great write Mr. L!!! Im craving twinkies!!!

Raven Carr March 25, 2009 at 11:09 AM WONDERFUL MR.LOPEZ!!!!!!!!!!!i love that one like always.thats funny.

Arany P. March 25, 2009 at 9:53 AM excellent writing, love the ' Tongue enveloping' ... ~ Arany

Carrie Richards March 25, 2009 at 8:28 AM I love the tonsil tackling line....that one especially...is a winning piece of poetry! ~ loved it! ~Love, Carrie

L'Nass Shango March 25, 2009 at 7:41 AM Best of luck, Abe, this deserves to be winner, I could not do a better job ... except in eating it. Love

Maryann Guoladdle March 25, 2009 at 7:27 AM MMMMM.... Makes me really hungry !!