Hospital Times Commonsense

Hospital times commonsense

Commonsense comes of age during hospital times
To trip on innocuous looking lapses and come up with questions
Road signs stand for visitors, locals have no need  of them
So the ambulance man notices one to seek directions from
Not to have noticed it so far was not my fault
Not to have divined as much was not his, no doubt.
But not to have properly known my neighbour was mine
For he works and matters in the hospital I am in
Parking lots cheat , vacant spaces you eye from a distance
Transforms into three cars in as many seconds
Short of cash, this old woman is asking for a loan
I remember, the one I see on my morning walks alone
Another mother  in the ICU has no use for frills
Her two sons squabbling on the question of sharing bills
Take her home to die is the younger one’s demand
The scrooge is drunk beyond stupid is what you slowly find
Cost of tests and tablets are just fringe accoutrements
The bill for their groundswell of goodwill is what in the end counts.

By S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For Giorio's 'Impress me-4'

Motif: Philosophical.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 1:08 PM
Strong images here Jagathsimhan congratulations..' 5kxy
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February 12, 2014 at 1:07 PM
Strong images here Jagathsimhan congratulations..' 5kxy
Mehta Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,
Andresen Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 3:14 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,JAG. - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
Song Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Back for a REread bc the details of this one are so vivid! Appreciate the last line for it's poetic strength! gwendolen
Brown Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Metaphoric Time" contest Jag. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 11:34 PM
Congrats--you wrote as an observant spectator all that goes on in the chaos of the hospital so well...I am reading what Linda Marie wrote about your Avatar below...hahah....I soup mailed ya! Hot off the press.
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June 17, 2012 at 4:26 PM
JAG,;-) congratulations with your wonderful win in my contest~ take care and have yourself a wonderful Fathers Day,~ xox~PD
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 8:25 PM
a deeply hard look at reality Jag.. how utterly prolific to read this touching write and ingest its meaning luv.. hope u are well.. luv your Avatar photo.. handsome .. luv..
Song Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 10:14 PM
I couldn't agree with this poem more! There are so many scenes within the scenery of the hospital...I say, "take her home to die!" There is no place like home! Jag, you recently wrote another poem where u were sitting in a waiting room at a medical appointment. In both of these poems u excellently paint the landscape of people, emotions, and the hustle and bustle of everyday life. Thanks for posting this one. You almost transported me back to the hospital I worked at over 20 yrs ago...ps...love the parking lot lines...great way to describe the dash for a pkg spot! Hurry up and post some more! :) Gwendolen
Carrillo Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 6:16 PM
Jag; Thiss kind of things happens all the time. That is life, but do you work in a hospital, or you a doctor? Just curious. many blessings. Lucilla
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 11:15 AM
So sad but so true jag. - Very well written, like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise (nurse)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 10:49 AM
Good write here jag and sad xx
Poet Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Very true words you have penned here Jag.Enjoyed the read.Yeah writing poem in an exam hall out of frustration.
Williams Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 10:23 AM
Jag, facts of life I am afraid my friend..david
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