Hospital Chirps

Written on July 23, 2012

As the doctors and nurses begin their day,
The cricket chirps resonate
Throughout the hallway;
as if they own all of the luck in the place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harper Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 7:09 PM
Excellent, Gail, wonderful thing to notice and yet conveys the fear, too.
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December 24, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Gail, Once again, we find ourselves trapped in the Holiday Season. And, hear I am stopping by to say Hi and to wish you a Merry Christmas once again sincerely from my heart. Loving each moment I found comforting here on the soup. Thank you for any comment or support you have offered now or in the past. Love always & forever ~ PD
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August 5, 2012 at 4:10 PM
Enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. Thanks for your comment. love phyl
M V Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 12:35 AM
Marvelous! I like it,Gail
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July 26, 2012 at 3:49 AM
Well done Gail - love (from a nurse) Anne-Lise :)
Collins Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 7:14 AM
Dear Gail - Something about this is so sad and uplifting all at the same time. I wish for a thousand doors open to them. love, Kathy
Guzzi Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 11:02 AM
Hopefully bring GOOD LUCK! Light & Love
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