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hospital parking
lone buzzard circles building….
sparrows fly

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Judy Ball

Date: 3/15/2021 3:18:00 PM

Oohoo! A buzzard circling the hospital. Scary sight. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/15/2021 5:15:00 PM

Judy, Yes, the day that I saw it there entered some very scary thoughts in my brain. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/13/2021 7:07:00 PM

A most thought provoking 3 lines. Buzzards indeed convey lives lost, perhaps the elderly, while sparrows (youth) flee. Open interpretation is poetry's muscle. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/14/2021 10:57:00 AM

Brian, Yes, people can get different meanings from a poem for sure. Yours is a good one. I am delighted that you dropped by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/13/2021 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations, Sara!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/14/2021 10:53:00 AM

Kim, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Gary Radice

Date: 3/13/2021 12:43:00 AM

Great haiku. I read it two ways..1) the buzzard as Covid (as suggested by Harry et al) flying in plain sight and sparrows dispersing representing people keeping their distance..and 2) drivers on the lookout for a parking space (buzzard) and then all rushing to get to a free space before anyone else does (sparrows) ... :) Cheers - Gary

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/13/2021 2:50:00 AM

Gary, Good interpretations. I appreciate you putting so much thought into reading and understanding my lines. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2021 10:25:00 AM

Wow!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2021 1:48:00 PM

Kim, Thanks for the wow. I appreciate that. Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2021 12:33:00 PM

i see i was reading this one the same way as Harry - clever write, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/12/2021 3:27:00 AM

Jack, I hope the vaccine(shots) get rid of that bird. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/10/2021 9:12:00 PM

Is the Buzzard the virus? This how i see this Sara, Interesting Haiku.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/11/2021 5:37:00 AM

Harry, He is definitely a virus. No one wants to be around him. He wants and needs to be left alone. Very well thought out comment. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/10/2021 3:07:00 PM

Hi Sara, Hospitals are so crowded these days. I hope that buzzards just passes the crowd by- Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2021 4:18:00 PM

Alexis, I hope that for most the treatment is now better and more survive this virus that is going around. My husband's cousin was in the hospital for about a month in intensive care, then in a regular room for another two weeks, then he had to go to rehab for another 2 or 3 weeks. He was talking suicide before he left the hospital for it was that hard on him.He is home now and doing much better, gaining strength every week. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/9/2021 11:26:00 PM

That buzzard looks like a moment of doom. Very well done.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/10/2021 10:20:00 AM

Lucky you were wearing a mask as they reek of rot, so much it is a wonder nestlings every surive! Aloha! Rico

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2021 4:19:00 AM

Victor, This was when the virus had first begun to get noticed and wearing of masks and people dying had started here. Yes, he seemed like a messenger of doom for someone in the hospital waiting for death. Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/9/2021 6:00:00 PM

I hope that vulture has collapsible wings! :) gw

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/10/2021 4:17:00 AM

Gershon, They are interesting birds. They will be beside the road eating a deer or some other animal that has been hit and eat so much they can't even fly away to avoid being hit by a car. That day I had carried my grandson to PT at the hospital and I was parked in the covered garage in the front row where I could see natural scene and I saw that view. Sara

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/9/2021 11:55:00 AM

Your turkey vulture looks just like the one that tried to knock me off a cliff I was climbing! Some just can't wait to eat! Aloha! Rico

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2021 12:53:00 PM

Rico, I am so glad that buzzard(vulture) wasn't successful in knocking you off. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2021 11:36:00 AM

- If I were a sparrow ... I would also fly away - We have some eagles flying over the house ... I'm afraid they'll catch my little dogs - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2021 12:50:00 PM

SS, Yes, eagles and hawks will get little dogs and carry them off. Mostly they seek out other foods though like fish for eagles and mice or rabbits for hawks. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/9/2021 11:08:00 AM

Hospital parking is a nightmare at the best of times, sparrows certainly wouldnt be hanging about with a buzzard lurking about. Hope your day is going well Sara. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/9/2021 12:44:00 PM

Tom, I am sure not as bad here in rural America as in a large city but at times one can't get a space where they need it so they won't have to walk so far. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

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