Horses and Snowflakes

Horses and snowflakes,
open fire and hoe cakes,
oh how they bring such joy 
to my heart.
Riding my black 
through fields of white,
taking me back
to a place of respite
youth can impart.

Rings and promises,
“I do’s” and adjectives,
lead to life filled with joy
to my heart.
Children and in-laws
come with the moment,
effect and cause
so volatile, potent
from the start.

Horses and snowflakes,
fields and quiet lakes,
musing on life filled with joy
to my heart.
Love in abundance,
strong everlasting,
nothing happenstance,
no way contrasting
a work of art.

© Oct 18 2010 Charles Henderson 13 th place
in Rambling's "Horses and Snowflakes" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:06 AM
VERY very nice, Charles. I am really enjoying reading these horse and snowflake contest winners today. Glad you made the winners circle with this nostalgic poem. LUv, Andrea
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
Roberts Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 1:14 PM
lovely entry Charles , congrats on your win in the contest
Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Mnay congratulation's Charles on your success in Constance's conest with this fine poetry >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:37 PM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry luv.. enjoy your grand win as I have enjoyed reading your poetry tonight...luv to Mrs. H for me..
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:14 PM
I agree with Joyce, Charles. This poem is in a class of its own. Congrats on your placement. Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Classy work Charles. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:44 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Charles
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 6:47 PM
enjoyed reading today!
Mehta Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 3:08 PM
I really enjoyed the images you have penned, Charles. Good luck in the contest.
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October 18, 2010 at 11:01 AM
Hi Charles I think this is beautiful.The way you have written these nostalgic memories,so soft, gentle and uplifting is truly wonderful.I'm sure it must be for the contest..And It's so good it must do well. luv June(sylvia)
Devonshire Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Excellent use of images, especially the contrast of the black horse bounding over fields of white snow. I really like the cadence in your poem as well. Gives it a unique, fast-paced quality -- kind of like a horse running. Well done, Charles! Best wishes in Constance's contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
October 18, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Very nice Charles and reads like a winner to me.. luve the flow of your words and verses .. a great way to begin my week..luv to Carolyn..for me..
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