Notes About The Poem

Horses

I named her Chestnut, color of her coat,
and love to hold her muzzle near my cheek,
then run my hand from poll through forelock tuft
down withers over croup...such grand physique.

But now concerned about her rear leg limp;
a problem with her stifle, gaskin, hock?
Or lower...coronet band on her hoof;
perhaps a stone in frog or sprained fetlock.

Inspection of back hoof showed small heel crack
most likely due to horseshoe mal-aligned.
With pat on back, I walk her to the barn
and waste no time...a farrier must find.

Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Premiere Contest: Horses
Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton
Judged: 10/30/2016

Required words to use: 
muzzle, forelock, fetlock, hock, withers, stifle, poll, 
croup, gaskin, frog, hoof, coronet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 9:51 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Sandra! Hugs
Haight Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 7:09 PM
Thank you very much, Eve! Hugs, Sandra
Gasun Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Wow! This is really fascinating! Congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Sandra. Hugs and cheers!
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:18 PM
Thank you again, dear Galeo, for your uplifting comments and congrats! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Nayak Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Dear Sandra, wonderful write on anatomy of horses in such a lovely poetic form! !Congrats on your great win!!! //love,Anu:)
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thank you so much, Anulaxmi! Hugs, Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 11:01 PM
I am so happy to see this take second place Sandra. As you know I loved it! Congratulations on your wonderful deserving win! 7+ ; )
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thank you again, Connie, for your lovely comment, nice rating, and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Daniel Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Lovely write, Sandra:) congratulations on your win:) This was sure a challenge that you have very well met:) A #7)
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much, Jo. Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 8:22 AM
Congrats on a fine win Sandra
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:15 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. Sandra
Scars Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 7:00 AM
awesome poem sweet Sandra :) -luloo
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Thank you so much, Laura. Hugs, Sandra
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 6:45 AM
Beautifully written, Sandra! I felt as if you were lovingly examining your prized horse! Congrats!
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Thank you very much, Kim. Hugs, Sandra
Arnone Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Beautifully written and instructional. I had to look up, farrier. Are you familiar with horses, Sandra, or was it simply good research? :-)
Haight Avatar
October 31, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Sorry for the belated reply, Tom, but I do want to thank you for your supportive comment on this poem. I am not familiar with horses, but good research did help! Sandra
May Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 10:32 PM
Very nicely written Sandra....GL in the contest
Haight Avatar
October 6, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. Sandra
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Reads like you know your way around a horse, Mrs Sandra. A wonderful informative poem! I once thought about becoming a blacksmith, a long time ago. Good money in that profession! Good luck dear lady!
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:27 PM
Daniel, I know very little about horses. Between the diagram which I posted with my poem and some other research, it came together. Thanks for the nice comments! Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Wow Sandra, this is so impressive! You wrote this like the professional poet you are with grace and style, including all the words that are needed with great finesse. Beautiful and Outstanding! 7+ ; )
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:26 PM
Oh, you are so kind, Connie. I was not going to take this challenge, but I found the diagram that helped so much. I appreciate your positive comments and the 7! Thanks so much. Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 3:49 PM
You did it well I'm not going to bother to hard x well Written x
Haight Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 7:24 PM
Thanks, Wendy, for the positive comment. It was tricky, but the diagram helped! Hugs, Sandra
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