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Use me and I'll abuse you. A stepping stone to a better view.   Let's bring future into focus.   My horizon chaser, I'd follow you to untouchable finish lines.   The other side of sunrise.   No matter what direction  I'll collide with you.  Abuse me and I'll use you.  When people ask how I got that scar  I'll truthfully say, I earned it honestly.   A birthmark placed there before kings had kingdoms  when I was yours and you were mine lifting each other up till  fate's intervention. Staying down until horizons are behind us, until our greatest accomplishments are achieved.  Battered spouse syndrome without the emotional deriding or blackened eye. Why do I stay? Must be the magnetism, the places she takes me or the way light tends to bend her way.

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Date: 7/29/2014 6:20:00 PM
TS Lewis, enjoyed your winning free verse poem..PD
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:08:00 AM
Fantastic verse TS! Mighty win...
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 7/23/2014 2:43:00 AM
Congrats to your well, deserved win! :-)
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 7/21/2014 2:35:00 AM
Great win..congrats
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:41:00 AM
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Date: 7/20/2014 11:49:00 PM
Amazing write Lewis ! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:42:00 AM
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:16:00 PM
TS, viewed through the lens of the first line this poem, line by line, exposes the depth of despair in a co-dependent relationship. Well written and haunting poem. Congrats on you placement
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:42:00 AM
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Date: 7/20/2014 12:48:00 AM
raw expressions that deserve a splendid win, TS... congrats and huggs
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:43:00 AM
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Date: 7/19/2014 9:47:00 PM
Congrats on a great win my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:43:00 AM
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Date: 7/19/2014 9:21:00 PM
Not sure if this one is really talking about spousal abuse, as the content seems to be saying other things that are very positive. Anyway, I really enjoyed this read!! Congrats for your awesome win.
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thank You. It only refers to abuse.
Date: 7/19/2014 5:07:00 PM
A beauty made TS or an ugly face... Congratulations on your fine win... Verlena
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:44:00 AM
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:44:00 PM
this one grabbed me from the first time I read it; those closing lines are perfection! congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:45:00 AM
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Date: 7/19/2014 4:24:00 PM
Way to go ....Congrats..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:46:00 AM
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Date: 7/11/2014 2:35:00 PM
A very powerful poem,.'Why do I stay?'...This is the voice of many who suffer abuse,both physically or mentally..Sad but true..Keep writing your profound thoughts in verse.
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Date: 7/31/2014 9:46:00 AM
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