Horizons

I wake to new horizons Distant vistas kiss my eyes Was it only yesterday I slept neath foreign skies Where has the familiar gone My perspective is unclear I struggle to make sense of it Is now my future here I cast my gaze about me But a different world I see I am standing in tomorrow Looking at what used to be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 20, 2013 at 8:13 PM
this is very deep BOB, beautiful as well...xox..LINDA
Johnson Avatar
July 4, 2012 at 12:10 AM
I love this rhyme Bob. It is a gem. I especially like the phrase "standing in tomorrow". Thank you for your nice comment on my poetry. Love, Joyce
Wesley Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 2:57 AM
Time is such a wonderful subject to write about and you have done it so well here. You won because your verses are beautifully unique. I love those last two lines! :)
Quigley Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 8:08 AM
Thank you Elizabeth. Much appreciated.
Brown Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "A New World" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 8:10 AM
Thank Carol
Burch Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Congratulaitons Bob on your win!! well done!! big hugs, love ya deb
Quigley Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 8:09 AM
Thank you Deb
Williams Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 7:18 AM
Bob congrats on your win..David
Quigley Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Thanks David
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May 10, 2012 at 6:42 AM
Congratulations on your winning piece Bob, nice one. xx
Quigley Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 8:24 AM
Thank you Mandy
Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 12:28 PM
short and sweet, just how I like this kind for the contest (new world, right?) Very much enjoyed it!
Quigley Avatar
May 7, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Thanks Andrea
Bauer Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 3:59 PM
beautiful! i love the rhyme, the flow and most important, what it says! very perceptive.
Quigley Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 10:48 AM
Thank you ilene. Much appreciated
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