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Horizon Beyond

Sky
     Sea
    B i r d
     Soar
    B o a t
     Drift 
   P e a c e
    Horizon
E T E R N I T Y
    Beyond


Entry in "Minimalism" contest
Sponsor: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

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Andrea Dietrich

December 21, 2018 at 6:13 PM

LOve how you stretched out the important words. Congrats on the great win, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf

December 22, 2018 at 6:45 PM

Thank you s o m u c h, Andrea! Season's best to you and your family! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier

December 21, 2018 at 5:42 AM

Whay a lovely peaceful effect, Gershon. Congrats on your win.

Gershon Wolf

December 21, 2018 at 1:20 PM

Thank you for the comment, Line. I was hoping to achieve what you described. Much appreciated. ~ Gershon

John Lawless

December 20, 2018 at 9:35 PM

This reads like a meditative word association mantra...beautifully done

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2018 at 10:09 PM

You must be telepathic, John. You read my thoughts. Thank you for the perceptive and gracious feedback. Best of the season! ~ Gershon

P.S. Awtry

December 20, 2018 at 4:53 PM

Congratulations on this very peaceful poem :)

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2018 at 10:10 PM

Thank you so much! Peace and Joy, Gershon

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

December 20, 2018 at 4:29 PM

Congratulations, very meditative - with no excess packaging.

Gershon Wolf

December 20, 2018 at 10:10 PM

That was the ticket -- no frills! … and thank you Cecelia for providing a venue in which we Soupers could stretch our wings and grow! Season's best, Gershon

M. L. Kiser

December 18, 2018 at 10:39 AM

I like this one, as I love the ocean; great imagery in such a small poetic package. Best of luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf

December 18, 2018 at 12:55 PM

Thank you, M.L....Want to see a super entry for this contest? ---Go to Maureen McGreavy's site and look at her minimalism. It's superfantabulous! ...Thanks for the feedback! Best wishes, Gershon

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