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Horizon Beyond

Sky Sea B i r d Soar B o a t Drift P e a c e Horizon E T E R N I T Y Beyond Entry in "Minimalism" contest Sponsor: Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 6:13:00 PM

LOve how you stretched out the important words. Congrats on the great win, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/22/2018 6:45:00 PM

Thank you s o m u c h, Andrea! Season's best to you and your family! ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/21/2018 5:42:00 AM

Whay a lovely peaceful effect, Gershon. Congrats on your win.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/21/2018 1:20:00 PM

Thank you for the comment, Line. I was hoping to achieve what you described. Much appreciated. ~ Gershon

John Lawless

Date: 12/20/2018 9:35:00 PM

This reads like a meditative word association mantra...beautifully done

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2018 10:09:00 PM

You must be telepathic, John. You read my thoughts. Thank you for the perceptive and gracious feedback. Best of the season! ~ Gershon

P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/20/2018 4:53:00 PM

Congratulations on this very peaceful poem :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2018 10:10:00 PM

Thank you so much! Peace and Joy, Gershon

Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer

Date: 12/20/2018 4:29:00 PM

Congratulations, very meditative - with no excess packaging.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/20/2018 10:10:00 PM

That was the ticket -- no frills! … and thank you Cecelia for providing a venue in which we Soupers could stretch our wings and grow! Season's best, Gershon

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/18/2018 10:39:00 AM

I like this one, as I love the ocean; great imagery in such a small poetic package. Best of luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/18/2018 12:55:00 PM

Thank you, M.L....Want to see a super entry for this contest? ---Go to Maureen McGreavy's site and look at her minimalism. It's superfantabulous! ...Thanks for the feedback! Best wishes, Gershon