Hopscotch

I saw God, so ... now what?

I wait,
standing in line 
at the grand Hopscotch Game

holding the stone in my hand 


Candide Diderot. ‘24 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Lawless Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 9:29 AM
This is perfect Candide, the simplicity of a moment captured and a very interesting metaphor for one to ponder. Nicely done.
Diderot Avatar
April 13, 2024 at 9:43 AM
Indeed. The vision of casting stones.
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