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Hoping You Can Feel Me

I sit alone and I think of you, hoping you can hear me
If I close my eyes just before I sleep, I can see you more clearly
Even where I am now, where everything is dark
I can feel you here beside me, gently tugging at my heart!

Anxiously, I wait to hear a precious word or two
Something to let me know you feel me as much as I feel you
I take the blame and apologize for these nights I have denied you;
But this gives me time to love your mind before I lay beside you!

Let me take away your pain; wipe away your tears and guide you
Let’s make love by pen and paper before I meld with you
I hope my words don’t sound too strong but passion has no fear
Each breath I breathe like ecstasy that has built up during this year!

There is no cure for what I feel it’s just the pain that ails me
All prescription meds from the medical doctors have failed me;
And I know this is a lot to take in but I mean each word sincerely
This hungry letter sent with love and passion hoping you can feel me! 

Note:  Written for Audrey Carey's Sentimental Love Letters" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/11/2010 8:15:00 AM
This is wonderful Jimmy!
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Date: 12/4/2010 4:49:00 PM
great one Jimmy. Congrats on your big win!
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on first place, in Audrey's contest~~
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Date: 11/8/2010 8:51:00 AM
This is so ROMANTIC....especially the lines about making love by pen....amazing write. While you only hope your love can feel you, this poem certainly has been felt by all readers. Congratulations, a well deserving win...regards..Rinki.
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Date: 11/8/2010 12:06:00 AM
Big Congratulations on your first win, Jimmy! It is a lovely poem expressing your deepest feelings of passion and love. God bless. Keep up the great work. Warmest Regards, Andrew.
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Date: 11/7/2010 5:32:00 PM
Great win, Jimmy. I enjoyed your heartfelt love letter. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in Audrey's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 11:08:00 AM
Jimmy congratulations on your first place in the contest with this beautiful write ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:49:00 AM
Super congrats Jimmy on your first place win with this very heartfelt letter! --nikko :)
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:43:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your first place win in the love letters contest with this excellent entry depicting luv ... enjoy my friend this happy Sunday with luv.
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:20:00 AM
Top honors for this incredible poem, Jimmy! Big sis is proud of you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:45:00 AM
soft smile...I'm sure she did ;) Light & Love may your heart continue to bloom!
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 11/7/2010 6:00:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place win, wll deserved my friend...
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:39:00 PM
applause for winning in audrey's contest.. fine write! warmest, nenette
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Date: 11/6/2010 8:33:00 PM
you got it playa
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Date: 11/6/2010 7:30:00 PM
clearly a first place winner. congrads. John H Loving III
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win Jimmy. Good job. Love,Joyce
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Date: 11/6/2010 6:06:00 PM
I love the last verse Jimmy, very deep. congrats on a well deserved win. Joy (Jew)
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Date: 11/6/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations, Jimmy on this heartfelt poem, and your 1st place win. So beautiful is this!!
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Date: 11/6/2010 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your Ist Place win in my contest, JAM.. This poem, from your heart was well written and heartfelt! Love, Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Jimmy
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Date: 11/6/2010 2:58:00 PM
Congratulations Jimmy on your well deserved first place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:58:00 PM
Congrats again Jimmy on a well deserved featured poem. Hope everything works out. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:30:00 PM
Congrats on the feature. Your sweetheart will come running into your arms. cheers suresh
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