Phillip Garcia Poet Free verse

Hope's Renewal

Tree-finger enchantments
   Shimmer pedantic staccato;
Violinist plucked
   Long-tails, blue in snow,
      Bewitched no longer, frolic.
   Embrace Poseidon.
       Whisper labyrinths cool to the wake.
East, I see an oblong ship pirouette
    Charging from Olympus…on fire,
        Shadowy Everests migrate west;
    Crisped saltines crumbled by guilt
       Whose silent peaks rejoice:
How beautiful the clouds swim in sunrise sky. 


2/15/2017

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John Hamilton February 17, 2017 at 12:09 PM Wonderfully unusual imagery, left me wanting to see it in real life, congrats on a fine win!

Charlie Smith February 17, 2017 at 10:45 AM Love the last line, congratulations Phillip...

Agnes Krampe February 17, 2017 at 8:23 AM Coming back with congrats on your win.

Agnes Krampe February 15, 2017 at 1:55 PM Beautiful images, Phillip.

Darren White February 15, 2017 at 9:15 AM Those clouds :) How they swim and form whatever you like to see in them. Beauty. Phillip Garcia February 15, 2017 at 9:23 AM Unless it's raining, of course, at which point we see what they want us to see. But that's a poem for another day, I reckon

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2017 at 5:00 AM - Good morning, Phillip - Hope your day becomes lovely - A great poem - // Anne-Lise :) Phillip Garcia February 15, 2017 at 5:02 AM Good morning to You! and Thank you to you, too