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Hopes and Dreams

i keep my hopes and dreams inside a paper sack i pull them out when i feel the need the ones that are stale i put them back those i take down to the shore and toss them in the sea the fresh ones like i said i keep and take them home with me to pull out when i feel the need

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/14/2018 5:36:00 PM
Lovely, Mike. Great excuse for a visit to the beach. Charming.
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:08:00 PM
This is so sweet. Your creative writing is fun. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 11/14/2018 3:01:00 PM
How enchanting and endearing your beautiful verses of your hopes and dreams are, Mike. I so enjoyed the charming and enlivening imagery of sorting through hopes and dreams and tossing what is stale and keeping those still fresh. An awesome poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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