Hopeless Inside

The face as clear a memory as a glossy picture, The words sting my heart as snakes would, I remember, I remember, I remember. Each day I seek to understand why, The past trailing behind me, Trying to smother me with a pillow of darkness, There were two of us, but it only matters to me. Dedicating my thoughts to this being, Oblivious, simple, ignorant, Waiting to find his replacement; Another cold-blooded reptile in this swamp. Sipping sharp liquor from cheap glasses at night, Clutching the pages setting out the tale, I seek to forget.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 25, 2016 at 10:54 PM
this is a deep write, i like the way you express the darker feeling of this tale.. LINDA
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January 4, 2016 at 12:09 PM
this is a very good write. SKAT
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May 15, 2015 at 7:12 AM
Trying to forget is hard, but you'll finally forget. Time is doubtless the best healer. You deserve more than a 7+!
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May 5, 2015 at 12:47 PM
- There is something dark and sad behind your thoughts - A truly talented poem, Martina ! - It is written from your heart and your soul - Bad memories are hard to forget, but we can try to forgive - hugs // Anne-Lise (I give you a 7)
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