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Hopeless Behind

There's something I want you to know
Hidden in the wilderness,on the darkness snow
I doesn't know either if its just a temptation.
Maybe its just excitement or temporary emotion

I'm on this point of confusion
Why I'm asking myself such question
And my heart keeps on making it a dictation
Does your smile is my greatness addiction?

But now my heart is shattered into pieces
Just like I've been hit by fatal,viral diseases 
Its not the person,its her smile I misses 
But I hope everything will fall to their places

I doesn't wanna loose that person, there some answers I need to find
Her smile wakes me up its one of a kind
But I think I need to let go of this doubtful grind
Now I'm asking why I'm hopeless behind?

I guess its time we part ways
I'm thankful that you give me those joyful days
And now I think I answer my own question
Cause now I'm letting go of my satisfaction

The feeling is neutral , there's no reason on feeling low
The right person will stay , the wrong ones will go
I'm just saying that we just need to appreciate our own value
And that's enough so we could expect others too.

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Teddy Kimathi Date: 8/2/2016 8:19:00 AM Greetings Baltazar. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/9/2016 12:06:00 PM Baltazar, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Baltazar Rodriguez Date: 7/10/2016 2:51:00 AM Thank you very much :)

Skat A Date: 7/9/2016 12:29:00 AM BR,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT* Login to Reply Baltazar Rodriguez Date: 7/9/2016 10:18:00 AM Thank you for that :)