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Hopeless Behind

There's something I want you to know Hidden in the wilderness,on the darkness snow I doesn't know either if its just a temptation. Maybe its just excitement or temporary emotion I'm on this point of confusion Why I'm asking myself such question And my heart keeps on making it a dictation Does your smile is my greatness addiction? But now my heart is shattered into pieces Just like I've been hit by fatal,viral diseases Its not the person,its her smile I misses But I hope everything will fall to their places I doesn't wanna loose that person, there some answers I need to find Her smile wakes me up its one of a kind But I think I need to let go of this doubtful grind Now I'm asking why I'm hopeless behind? I guess its time we part ways I'm thankful that you give me those joyful days And now I think I answer my own question Cause now I'm letting go of my satisfaction The feeling is neutral , there's no reason on feeling low The right person will stay , the wrong ones will go I'm just saying that we just need to appreciate our own value And that's enough so we could expect others too.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/2/2016 8:19:00 AM
Greetings Baltazar. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
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Date: 7/9/2016 12:06:00 PM
Baltazar, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Baltazar Rodriguez
Date: 7/10/2016 2:51:00 AM
Thank you very much :)
Date: 7/9/2016 12:29:00 AM
BR,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Baltazar Rodriguez
Date: 7/9/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank you for that :)