Hopeful Sky

She awoke to dawn’s crispy rising,
her head filled with tasks for the day
and what she found surprising,
the time was here, come what may.

The eventful night must be perfection.
It was in the planning for ages.
Each detail sans objection,
having gone through many stages.

This graduation was like no other,
her eldest son with top honor.
Recalling his small voice, “Mother”,
a melancholy fell upon her.

The evening came, a noted benchmark.
The gaiety of youth lit the sky with dreams, 
each other’s thought became hope’s spark.
A mother’s tears glittered down in streams.

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Date: 8/12/2022 2:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Hopeful Sky" is a lovely write/story. They grow up so very fast. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/12/2022 3:19:00 PM
Many thanks to you Paula my friend. I appreciate your visits and comments always :) Linda
Date: 8/11/2022 9:45:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to the mother/child relationship carefully nurtured every day, every minute, through all the seasons of all of the years, Linda. Lovely peek into that celebration of life! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/11/2022 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and valued opinion Sam. I'm always happy to see you here. :) Linda
Date: 8/11/2022 6:40:00 AM
Linda, congratulations on your winning placement, graduations are important celebrations!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/11/2022 1:19:00 PM
Thank you Tania. I am pleased with the placement. Let's do another one :)) Linda
Date: 7/27/2022 7:49:00 AM
Greatest pride of a Mother lies in success of her children. Congrats
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/27/2022 8:54:00 AM
Hi Anisha. Yes, it does. Thank you for stopping by with such kind comments. Linda
Date: 7/25/2022 6:50:00 PM
Pride reserved for mothers of sons who EARN their degee...Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 7/26/2022 6:45:00 PM
I could not begin to count the "graduates" I have interviewed who clearly lacked basic understanding of their subject. I often wondered how many cereal boxtops it took to get their degree! Aloha!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/26/2022 5:19:00 AM
How very true Rico. It's nice when you see one who studies hard and responsibly pays back his school loans because it's the right thing to do! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/25/2022 7:13:00 PM
How very true Rico. It's nice when you see one who studies hard and responsibly pays back his school loans because it's the right thing to do! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Linda
Date: 7/25/2022 6:26:00 PM
Linda, good luck in the contest, quite a party! ~Anaya
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/25/2022 7:00:00 PM
Many thanks Anaya. Back at ya with your Christmas In July Saint Monicas Mission! Linda
Date: 7/25/2022 5:22:00 PM
Lovely poetry Linda, felt like i was there too, the visual is so good.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/25/2022 5:30:00 PM
You are so kind Harry. Your supportive words are always welcome and encouraging! Thank you! Linda
Date: 7/25/2022 11:18:00 AM
It was certainly a proud moment for you Linda, Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/25/2022 2:16:00 PM
I was merely an observer at this party Tom, but the mother was just beaming at the attendees (about 150 of them!). Quite a stir in the skies :)
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