Hopeful

Hopeful





            Whispers in the corridor heard louder and closer,
                 as security man asks relatives to leave,
             In recovery room post operative patients wait,
                 docs are on their way for morning round,
                many queries unanswered pop up in minds.

       
                            breathes freshness in air
                       a tender bird spreads its wings
                             squirrels hop around

               Mother is apprehensive to know about prognosis
               as her only child suffers cancer for last two years,
                     bubbly charm lost in deep ocean of pain,
                    if playful school days could be back again ?
                       teachers return with bagful complaints
                                    Of the naughtiest one.

                                      a bright new sunrise
                               buds in vibrant colours bloom
                                    shines the morning dew
  
                  Hope like a colourful feather floats in air to tempt
                   as they humbly pick and hand over to the mother,
                         her eyes twinkle, tears reflect the dazzle,
                       grateful to God for those kind healing hands,
                       He sent from heavens nourishing many souls.

                                       the perishing seeds
                                      saviours water in time 
                                         green revolution 

     
   
   
  
Written Nov 19th, 2015
For contest "Creative haibun"
By Charlotte Puddifoot 

Awarded 5th place win

Entered for Russell Sivey's contest
"Choose a topic" on Nov 15, 2017 
My chosen topic is C- hope
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
November 28, 2015 at 3:18 PM
Dr Upma, :) A nice and creative win. Love SKAT
Cwiak Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 10:45 AM
Nicely done, Upma. A well deserved win with this pensive write.
Callus Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 5:04 PM
Congratulations on this merited win, Upma! I too especially like the last haiku. Regards // paul
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:47 PM
Thanks a lot Paul.. so glad to have ur visit and kind words!
Cheema Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 10:57 AM
A lovely haibun! The overlapping of harsh reality and nature is beautifully done, Upma!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Thanks Balveen!
Dutta Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Wonderful poem. Congratulation for your placement in the contest. Love Anisha D
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Thanks Anisha.
Puddifoot Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:06 AM
this is good writing on an emotional subject, and i think the writing got stronger towards the end of the poem; that last haiku is excellent, and took several reads before i fully appreciated its excellence, and in fact that one haiku is what clinched it as a winner - congrats on your win in my contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:44 AM
An honour having placed in ur contest Charlotte! So glad u liked!
Canerdy Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 8:21 AM
Reading this winning poem is a moving experience--especially on Thanksgiving Day!
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Thanks Janice!
Kayode Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 6:35 AM
Congrats on the win with this great poem Upma...hugs
A. Sharma Avatar
November 26, 2015 at 7:22 AM
Thank you for ur kind visit n words Kayod5 !!
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