Hopeful....

The day ends, this time has come
love and passion, shared one intimate night
hopefully making a miracle

She dreamed this time was right, this time would be tonight
the sensuous sensation flowing from his body to hers,
as they made love once again
she graced herself with happiness and fear
fear of not knowing what might have happened

As the days went by, she counted them one by one
hoping time would fly, hoping this time would be right
and this would happen
she never felt so sure of anything, she knew it had to happen
she lied to herself, to make believe it was already happening
she knew it couldn't fail, not so many times

So she waits, wondering, hoping and praying
looking for her miracle

When suddenly something happened, something took place
at that very moment, she felt pain, hard pain
she knew nothing would ever be the same

She couldn't believe it 
but it was true
she wasn't with child
as her monthly punched through........
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 1/6/2009 5:16:00 PM
Your miracle will come.... always, Christy
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Date: 1/6/2009 5:09:00 PM
deep write...tnx for the comment... *Breana
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Date: 1/6/2009 2:26:00 AM
Tyesha I remember so vividly what this feels like. The pain, the wondering if it will ever happen. I hope all goes well. Laurie
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