Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Hope There Is None Visual of a Verso

my soul is torn in two

trapped  in this tomb

in anguish  and despair

do I dare run

hide in shadowed alleys

my scars  consume

thoughts I cannot forgive

hope there is none

By8/20/2015 


Sponsor:Broken Wings



Contest Name: Any poem trashed in a recent contest

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Michael Tor September 9, 2015 at 12:04 PM Eve another win my fingers are aching congratulating with so many wonderful writes. You will be the reason for my arthritic pain in my fingers. lol. Great effort !

Skat A September 5, 2015 at 12:33 PM Eve, Congrats on your win... LUV ~SKAT~ Eve Roper September 6, 2015 at 4:02 PM Skat, thanks for stopping by with your support and congrats! It means so much to me. Hugs, Eve

Kim Merryman September 5, 2015 at 10:49 AM Your words bring hopelessness to the forefront. Good interpretation of the photos, Eve! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Eve Roper September 6, 2015 at 4:03 PM Kim , thanks you so much for support and congrats! It means so much to me. Hugs, Eve

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 5, 2015 at 10:47 AM Wonderful write Eve! Wonder how it got trashed! Congrats on big win! Eve Roper September 6, 2015 at 4:03 PM Dr. Upma A. Sharma, thanks you so much for support and congrats! It means so much to me. Hugs, Eve

Barbara Campbell September 4, 2015 at 6:50 PM Eve, Congratulations on this well-written and thought out re-entry. Barbara Eve Roper September 6, 2015 at 4:01 PM Barbara, thanks so much for your support and congrats! It means so much to me. Hugs, Eve

Jadazzle United September 4, 2015 at 5:29 PM Dropping back with my congrats Eve so glad you placed in Broken Wings contest:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper September 4, 2015 at 5:58 PM Thank you, Jan. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich August 23, 2015 at 6:54 PM this one shows a lot of anguish feeling in it. I like how you got the atmosphere of the pictures!

Eric Boddie August 22, 2015 at 10:15 AM the mere power of thought....is what we all have sought....for inspiration speaks to us this way.....it is evident by what these words say....;)

Tim Smith August 21, 2015 at 1:07 PM When we are at our lowest and think there is no hope, He always shines down on us. great verse to go with the pic. Eve Roper August 21, 2015 at 11:00 PM The photo reminded me of the 3 girls they found loçked up . They had been kidnapped and held for quite a few years. By heart still ach from what they endured

Sandra Haight August 21, 2015 at 12:00 PM Eve, such a great way you interpreted these visuals! Best wished for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Eileen Manassian August 21, 2015 at 2:37 AM Very powerful write, my dear. I really like who you interpreted this piece. Hugs!!!

Jan Allison August 21, 2015 at 1:58 AM such deep and dark imagery Eve I can't get my muse into gear to write for this contest I find the images so sad - will try again later:-) hugs Jan

Demetrios Trifiatis August 21, 2015 at 1:05 AM What a terrible moment for the soul! So vividly your thoughts expressed that manage to transmit the message intensified, dear Eve!