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Hope Never Dies

Night follows day in bitter hungry monotony, as wane laughter dies upon parched lips, and ignorant innocence is trampled underfoot at every corner of the decadent deserted plain. Homeless bulimic children unsmiling, subdued, thirsty seek dilapidated dug-in shelters devoid of nourishing food. Employment inexistent, as the rich grow richer, the poor poorer. Death is not far away. Famine reigns. This is today's nightmare as vultures fly above ready to prey on dead children’s carcasses below. But I am headstrong and will not give up. For I'm sure someday there will be a reckoning, a purge, where judgment triumphs. Then as years roll by, we will return to till the land, our laughter will increase, our food becomes abundant, our minds will return to sanity. And all my wishes will come true. Love grows with humility and respect. But that's another story, another age.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 12/20/2021 12:18:00 AM
Despite the starvation and disease we see around, there will dawn better tomorrows. This hope pulls us along. "Love grows with humility and respect. But that's another story, another age." Love your concluding lines- Victor. Altogether a highly commendable poem.
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Date: 8/5/2021 1:45:00 PM
Good
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Date: 8/3/2021 1:52:00 AM
- Even if things seem hopeless ... hope is the last thing we lose ... a thought-provoking poem, Victor - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/2/2021 5:32:00 AM
So very sadly true, Victor, you have painted a painful reality, but love the positivity towards the end:) yes, hope never dies:)
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Date: 8/1/2021 10:01:00 PM
Great write, Victor, a problem that lives almost everywhere. My heart goes out to so many left in this dilemma. My also concern is the human trafficking that take advantage of these poor children. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:43:00 PM
May there always be hope. Great poem Victor
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Date: 8/1/2021 12:43:00 PM
thought provoking piece Victor, very well penned:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/1/2021 9:29:00 AM
It's nice to know there will always be hope, no matter how bleak the current circumstances. I loved the last verse. Blessings and hugs.
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Date: 8/1/2021 6:02:00 AM
I like the upbeat turn towards the end, Victor. Yes--the imbalance is growing and one day it will blow up when people can't take it anymore. I like your vision of what happens next.
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Date: 8/1/2021 5:48:00 AM
Impressive ideas, Victor. People may die while we wait, but hope can never succumb. In our world era, unfairness prevails; we would instead choose to live in a world where people love one other? Excellent prose with great symbolism and beautiful imagery.
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:26:00 AM
Hope never dies but people do in the meantime. That this world is unfair is the truth, what’s happened to love thy neighbour as yourself. Well said, well written Victor… Belle
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:14:00 AM
Hi Victor, You painted such a vivid picture with words. It saddens me that children somewhere live like this. It doesn’t make sense. Good change of direction in your well-written write, I agree, no matter how dark the day, love and hope will prevail. Well done, my friend-Alexis
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Date: 8/1/2021 1:26:00 AM
Sometimes life is like that but one thing we should never give up on hope. Tom
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Date: 8/1/2021 12:53:00 AM
So true that.. "Love grows with humility and respect... "... Great insights Victor.... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/1/2021 12:26:00 AM
This makes uncomfortable reading and now Covid is added to the misery..Delice
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