Hope Lives

I can never get enough of you and that confident smile as your wit encases my mood you're an afternoon splash of fervor a gleam out off in the seas a hope that's suddenly excited the tide rushing in with each beat a toast to the moon and the sunlight a laugh in the favourable breeze aimlessly we float with each other when life doesn't always breathe peace I can never get enough of you as your blues look straight into mine so I remind you each day you are beautiful and offer you all of my time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 11:47 PM
Love your romantic love, Tim.. hugs Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 9:19 AM
She sounds lovely! Pretty personified.
Vaso Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 12:47 AM
Even I wish I could meet this Hope, she is something special!!! Great write!
Man Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:37 PM
Beautifully pen.. romance drips from your skilled pen!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:28 PM
So romantic, Tim. I adored that last stanza, "as your blues look straight into mine"
Manassian Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Flawless in beauty....
Chircop Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:14 PM
A very sweet poem Tim..Loved it
Nance Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:32 PM
aww sweet
Flower Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:51 AM
I like the flow of thoughts here. Quite melodious. :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Sweetness! :) xomo
Allison Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 7:12 AM
aww so beautiful and romantic Tim:-) a joy to read this glorious summer afternoon:-) hugs Jan xx
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