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Hope Is Loomed

Hope is Loomed By Dane Smith-Johnsen Mother earth in the background lies. Comes one woman with life to birth. Bequeathed beneath beautiful skies. Fruitful blossom grows, gift to Earth. Strong! And protected from sun’s heat. Red umbrella defends sweat’s blaze. Along life’s straight path walk clad feet. Man-made boots on each bare foot stays. Blackened earth, on which life sparkles, see- Gone ways. First born. Know they believed. Neither pride nor rock could stop that fleece. When spirits’ lost honor received. Woman’s bounty; life’s showy bloom, Bravery with strengths carries life on. Elders of the tribes face new dawn. Upon the future hope is loomed. Written for Abe Lopez’s Native American Ekphrasis contest. You may view the painting using the link below. Enjoy! And enjoyed. http://images.artnet.com/artwork_images_1156_365659_tc-cannon.jpg

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Date: 4/24/2011 1:10:00 PM
Dane ;-) CONGRATULATIONS!! on your poem being featured this week, hope your enjoying your Easter Sunday. Take care and have a nice one,..p.d
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Date: 4/20/2011 9:06:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your featured poem this week on P.S. .. a wonderful one to share with us all my friend with luv..
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Date: 4/20/2011 3:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured this week on Soup, Dane-Ann. Amazing! Thanks for leaving a comment on mine. Have a blessed holy week. Love, Annalise
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Date: 4/19/2011 10:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulationson your poem being featured this week, Dane
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Date: 6/11/2009 4:08:00 PM
the link did not work for me..pout...the verse does not stand alone dear one ;( soup me how to see the art? Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2009 1:34:00 PM
You'll have Soup Mail in a moment.
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Date: 6/2/2009 5:08:00 AM
another great poem Dane, i had to see the painting so i minimised the screen and put the painting next to the poem as i read it. Perfect
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Date: 5/30/2009 2:01:00 AM
Super poem Dane, all the best for the contest>James
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Date: 5/29/2009 1:08:00 PM
The ending took the breath away! Well-written, nice one! keep writing...
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Date: 5/28/2009 7:55:00 PM
Great poem, loved the ending -Jessica
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Date: 5/28/2009 11:09:00 AM
Good job. Jese
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Date: 5/28/2009 7:08:00 AM
Hello Dane Ann...Thanks for the soup mail this morning!:) I almost chose this same painting as a subject for my poem, but now I'm glad I didn't.....because you did it much more justice than I could have. Excellent portrayal of this Work of Art by TC Cannon!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/27/2009 10:37:00 AM
As creative and artful as the piece itself, kindest thoughts Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/27/2009 4:42:00 AM
I ENJOYED THE ARTWORK THAT INSPIRED TTHIS EXCELLENT POEM,"Comes one woman with life to birth. Bequeathed beneath beautiful skies." I love these strong lines with their alliteration. the whole poem is strong,calm and rhymed with seeming ease . I must say "thank you" for digging out two of my old poems I had for gotten them GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:19:00 PM
I really like the perspective in this poem. Way to make art come alive. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for the kind comments. Have a wonderful day. Karen
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:00:00 PM
Just brilliant! Exceptional Ekphrasis. You chose a beauty and did it more than justice! Good luck! Love, shar
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:41:00 AM
Beautiful! This is a great contest, such imagry. well done, love, Kristin
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:42:00 AM
I am impressed too with Abe's choice of painter ... he has chosen most wonderful ... and what an inspiration is his work ... best of luck in the contest ... your poem is on the money.
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:13:00 AM
awesome--my friend,i wish you good luck from my heart--charma
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:30:00 PM
A wonderful write with great imagery Dane!
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Date: 5/25/2009 10:12:00 AM
An amazing portrait of Native American culture, Dane Ann. You should do very well in the contest with this entry! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2009 8:08:00 AM
Wow....another remarkably deep poem, your words are truly captivating, keep it up :) -Jessica
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Date: 5/25/2009 7:54:00 AM
Colin just gave me the same advice I had given him earlier on his poem....I guess i need to take my own advice.
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Date: 5/25/2009 7:31:00 AM
This is amazing writing my friend..your words are so captivating and the picture you paint so well brings me into the piece to enjoy the beauty...you have done this magnificent artist well..best wishes in the contest.
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