Hope For a Hope

The river of time is flowing and laving every second of my life
Wish I can make it stop even just for a while
I am buried under my own thoughts and it’s hard to breathe
My soul is drowned in the tears of grieve 
My heart sleeps without waking in the arms of sadness
And I feel myself vanishing, in my fake existence
My pain is drenched in my tears
My eyes are facing my worst fear
Waiting for a cold wind to whisper in my ear
that, the one I am longing for is somewhere near
To know the feeling of your touch, has become my life’s bane
And I began to burn in your love’s ignited flame
Hold me tight in yourself before I start to fade
Loving you is the only thing for which I am made

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/21/2011 8:46:00 AM
Katrina, one thing we need is hope for hope... what a gift it would be to open a page .. that will heal the longing of hope.. its like when we stand tall and than fall into them tears. who's 2 restore the hope and faith ever again. I have an x- i told him not 2 let me fade away.. and little he did.. now that he is trying to be what i wanted.. sadly the hope to hang on has left the building. He does not know yet. But, in my heart I thought loving him was all i wanted. thanks for sharing..p.d.
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